I'm too lazy to sign in this time, so I'm just gonna ask through here. I've been hiding out on the Static Shock fanfic thing for a while so I haven't been watching... Okay, well, the point is I was wondering if you were ever going to pick this one up again. Are you still having writer's block? Maybe I can help... Uh... ANY-way, my email addy is in my account so... give me a ping or something... yeah, Penguin Peace!

love to see Otto kick some ass
=]

SQUEE! *glomphugglecomforts ultimate Otto* When do they come through and join the war? Huh, huh, huh? Writer's block seriously sucks. I mean seriously. Well, hm... I can't really think of anything to help you just now. However, I would be glad to help you bounce ideas around. You can find my email address in my profile. If you want help, feel free to contact me. Just make the subject clear so I know who it is. If you like Static Shock, maybe you can help me with these two story ideas I'm kicking around. They're in my profile as well. Man, I hate writer's block... keep writing!

Really cool chapter.I like it.

cool so far and Otto is a good cathlic nice one =]. please write more and please let Ock use machine guns or pitols he will look so col. i'll write another review later on for you bye

The bad guys have the blue prints for the machine? If it's the machine I think it is, the good guys must be in big trouble. Hey, you know what might be fun? It's only a suggestion... not even a suggestion, more like a musing. Have you ever heard of Carlyle? I probably spelled his name wrong... Any way, he was sort of a Doc Ock like character, he forced Otto to make him a set of tentacles with six instead of four. It might be fun to bring him in somehow, which might be possible if the machine is what I think it is. You know, so one of the Otto's can fight him. They fought in the comic yes, but still... anyway, great story. Update as soon as you can.

Yay! I've been wanting to see a fic where the different Ottos interact with each other. I love all forms of Otto, but I can't wait to see Ultimate come into the story. He's so deliciously and sadistically insane. I especially like the part in Volume Ten where he's got Peter hostage on the plane to Brazil and rips Pete's tooth out with a tentacle. Otto just went further and further off the deep end as the series went along. Anyway, I'll be watching for updates, though it would be hypocritical to ask you to update soon, seeing how lazy I am with updates. Penguin Peace!

Technically, Doc Ock has *six* arms and two legs. Sorry, I'm a stickler for details. But besides that, it's an intriguing idea to see all the Octopuses together in one place. Great work.

GOod.

Rather nice chapter I like it.

Rather cool idea.I'm intereated to see what happens next.

Ah, Silver!

(Does the happy llama dance) Uh-huh uh-huh uh-huh!

This looks cool!