thats a sad story. Really sad but now he's a decepticon.

ah, good ol' crazy cyclonus

Yeah, this sounds cool! Poor Cyclonus. Write a sequel!

DeltaSilver88 my friend your a Genius!

It's a very interesting story. New and unique. Good job.

I have to admit, your stories really are worth reading. This was a bit short, but it was good and you have an interesting theory here. Way to go! ;)

I do like this short ficcie In fact I like everything with cute copter-bot Cyclonus on it!

Though Cyclonus as an Autobot is something strange but not impossible

I think maybe you could stretch this out into a longer fic. It's a good start, albeit not exactly what I personally would've thought about Cyclonus.