AWESOME! ;) write more!

Oops that was meant to Pigwideon

Amazing! Absolutely amazing! Although I don't exactly like stories like this, it's very nice. Ja! Keep writing no matter what! _

You said Hedwig had died with the Voldemort thing, but in chapter 1 she was delivering mail to Harry.

Great story. Please write a seqaul to it. A couple of things though, you repeated the same scene twice but with a slightly different version, and moody only drinks from his personal hip flask it. Great story please write more.

Thanks for all the advice and the indepth review! I appreciate it! In truth the reason why it's all happening in a week is because this is a story arc to continue in several other stories I think with much more of New Avalon to be seen. Philip will remain a character (see the Epilogue :-)) and many more stories shall emerge. I'm glad you liked it and I'll work on my grammar and images.

THE GOOD: Really intriguing plot. The concept of sending everyone to New Avalon, the issues of getting Harry onto the Quidditch team, and the return of Grindelwald are all such fantastic ideas. THE BAD: For one thing, I think this could have been stretched out quite a bit - taken place over the three years they spend at New Avalon, rather than all within the first week. Take time to develop Philip's character, etc. You also need to find a devoted editor to help out with the grammar and checking the imagery, etc. Some points can be a little confusing, I had to read through a few times. THE UGLY: Grindelwald leaving Philip by literaly snaking out of his mouth, and whats-her-name being a soulsucking demon. Yech! :P I definitely look forward to seeing what else you come up with!

Ooops!

Oh well I've got it corrected.

Thanks for reviewing and personally I hope alot of reviewers are just waiting for the story's end.

I love feedback and intend on making it an arc! If I don't know what people think of the new places, characters, and plot...what shall I ever do!

Thanks for reviewing!

I can't BELIEVE i was the only person to have reviewed! well, anyway, the Malfoy's house elf is Dobby, not Dolby. i can't wait to read the rest!

cool!