|Reviews for My Origins|
| Lord of the End Times 9/28/05 . chapter 1
Good. I'd like to see this continued.
| The General of Darkness 2/9/05 . chapter 1
Okay...i have absolutely no idea what broken sky is..._...but this looks good so far. A few grammatical errors, but one can look pass those. i'm intrigued...please write more. I don't really think a Pronunciation guide was necessary (YET) only because none of those characters were mentioned. As i mentioned before...please continue this. I've grown a bit tired of reading DBZ and trigun fics...and this might be the "fresh breath of air" i need :-). Keep working at it.
| evelyn skye 1/25/05 . chapter 1
wow. that is way good. excellent, can't wait for more