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wmwhitewolf 2/20/12 . chapter 2
OH PLEASE MORE I LOVE IT what a cliff hanger man please more soon i know its been awhile but it is a great story
Inoeth 12/15/11 . chapter 2
I am well aware that this story has been more or less abandoned but I just discovered you and your writing (I am in the process of reading your Numb3rs series) and found this story to have a HUGE amount of potential.

If you do complete this story, there are a few things you have to clear up - that being how many slayers there are in this world now- how they are organized- the general setup of the new SWC in the first place, how relationships have changed and evolved (ie the fact that you are using Anya when she had died originally- so is she now with Xander in some way or form.) Another more potentially interesting issue (being that this is a military base (former in this case) is the fact that Willow is gay and unless you change things- is dating Kennedy (or some other girl - but ever since Tara i've always seen her as a lesbian IMO) and how her sexuality could conflict with military moral values.

Anyways, I do hope you continue this story or write a new one on the basis of this story but a bit more expanded and flushed out.

keep up the good work and continue writing fanfiction.
lilacsandroses93 5/6/11 . chapter 1
Very good story, I hope you'll be able to finished it. I really like it alot. Will the tok'ra know about the slayers during the rebellion? Please, Please continue. Will there be any romantic relationship between Buffy and Jack? Because she seems to like older men LOL! Best of luck on your stories.
blue talith 5/6/11 . chapter 2
Oh, if only Jess S1 had been able to continue this exciting story, it would have been marvelous!
blue talith 5/6/11 . chapter 1
Selling the stargate to the WSC is a priceless idea!
jgood27 4/19/11 . chapter 2
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
DemonKittyAngel 2/28/11 . chapter 2
How about posting another chapter? It's only been... oh, a few years. :P
TechnoFire 10/17/10 . chapter 2
HURRY! ADD MORE
Vi-Violence 6/4/10 . chapter 2
I'd love to see another chapter to this.
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight 2/18/10 . chapter 2
Please write a new chapter.
hermiony 1/19/10 . chapter 1
This is great story and because of it I am interested if you will ever finish it. I hope you will.
fyrefly101 9/24/09 . chapter 2
I realise it's been quite a while since you added any to this, but were you ever thinking of continuing? Having only just come across the 2 chapters, I've really liked them so far, and of course, that's quite a teasing ending you've left it at!
garrycooper101 8/6/09 . chapter 1
In the words of Arte Johnson, "Verdy Interrestink".
Zarelle 7/20/09 . chapter 2
Loving this story. If you're looking for an overall plot, maybe something that combines the threat of demons with aliens. Demon aliens! Uh.

I think you are doing well with the characterisation, so I'd be sad if you'd left this fic.
hermiony 6/23/09 . chapter 2
This is a great story. I know that you haven't updated it in a long time and becouse of that I was wandering if you will continue writing it in the future.
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