whole family's one in the same. lol. always yellin or bitin someones head off. cute.

great story. love Lily's mood swings and such. lot's of people make the whole pregnancy all perfect and nothing bad happens but you didn't and that's what great about it. Love the things that Sirius wrote in the card. Once questions, does Harry really mean power?

aw that's soo cute! I love it! :D:D

AW!

lol, I can so see James and Lily yelling at doctors. what a cute story though. I really liked it. It was cute, but the humor kept it from being too sappy. Nice work.

I think I love the baby Harry more than the books Harry. Goochie Goo!

aww!! i loved it! so sweet! ^_^

So absolutely sweet!

“Lily learned to fight from you. She’s strong man,” Sirius pointed out.

That was great.

Another great story! It seems I review for you more than anyone else on this whole freakin website.

You must be really good =)

Judy

She clutched her stomach and got out of bed. “Ow,” Lily moaned. “Oh…um, my water broke.”

“Oh it’s okay, we’ll buy you another one,” James insisted, still groggy.

LOL.

really cool! you might only want to use one punctuation mark thought (Hi! not Hi!!) It just looks more proffessional.

that was great write more

This is very good, I do hope you keep this up!

This is really cute I like it alot please update soon. :)