Nice one-shot i also always wanted to see how Neji apologized to Hinata and how would their relationship fixed however it looks like kishimoto will never show it. They havent even crossed words since the chunnin exams! However youallowed it with this fic. Thank you 4 writting it!!

Damn... Incredibly IC, I say. You've done a great job and I've only seen about three or four grammatical errors. But other than that, this is a great one-shot. Hope to see more stories from you!

Aww...this was so sweet...and delightfully in character as well. Hats off to ANYONE who writes the Naruto characters IC, because it's so rare. I always wondered about the transition between Neji's attitude toward Hinata between the Chuunin Exam and the last regular chapter in the Naruto manga. This is pretty much exactly what I'd imagined. And I agree with you--I like the Naru/Hina pairing, and I think Hinata's adorable! Lol, I personally love this story, but you're right to brace yourself for flames. I predict any flames you receive will go like this: "OMG you suxxorz Naru-chan luvs SASUKE-KUN 4EVER!!1" It's rare to find readers who like the more realistic non-yaoi pairings in the Narutoverse... *sigh*

I've liked this a lot. Not surprising, since my likings seem to be pretty much in tune with yours. There is nothing I can say to make this story better.

Very well written. Good grammar. Excellent one-shot.

On a note, Hakkeshou in it's literal form mean "Eight Trigram Palm". In referrence to Naruto it would be "Divination Palm" or "Divine Hand".

This was an idea I was actually thinking of doing as a one-shot also. I have also did something similar in a AU/Crossover called "Horse of the Leaf".

Again, good job and keep writing.

Purrdy. Aah...I want some yummy NejiHina now.