How horribly dull and unoriginal. This is probably the perfect example of a shitty, terribly thought out gender-bender pregnancy fic ever. You even included the horrible personified emotions bit. I didn't really think that shut like this could be produced on purpose. You amaze me. Have a golf clap. Terrible, forced, dull details that are added in as after-thought, and a ridiculous plot progression. Thanks for wasting space on the Internet.

can you continue please?

you are the sickest person ever you sick bastard

Ever hear of the word continue?

write more!

BBxRae 4 evas

YOU ARE A FU**ING SICKO. Raven should NOT have sex with slade! BBxRAE forever!

that is the most disterbing thing i have ever read. is there supposed to be some sort of relationship between the two of them? because that is just wrong and creepy. why would he want that? ew!

i'm begging you to write more

what going on here your going to let her be used and pass the burnden to her child

hope this has a turning point. update

don't do that... its cruel...don't let raven take slade's deal... make her find a spell and change BB

Trigon and Slade...curse them both to the deepest circles of the former's home...gr! *shakes fist at them*

HEY! THIS IS AWESOME! Please update soon.

Oh, I have one pet peeve;

It's hard to tell when a character is talking because you seem to forget the quotations ("") sometimes. THanks!

i have seen some good stories, but this one is great. Please up date soon

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