I like this. Particularly Boromir getting caught by fangirls.

*blinks* Well it was certainly fun, although I hate to think of AnkhMorpork without Verinari. You'd think old age would be too initmidated to show up. Still, very fun. Thanks.

Heheeh! You write very well. Once again you have astounded me with your abilities and blinded me with Faramir's cuteness. Hope to see more from you soon.
~KC

*snigger snigger* Wow. Quite unexpected, but hilariously funny. Fangirls? Wookies? I am cracking up. Lovely. Keep up the great work.
~KC

Heh! This is lovely. I love what you've done with Faramir and Boromir, you bring out their personalities rather well. All aspects of earlier details are covered, which is good cuz it's annoying when authors (including myself) forget about stuff and leave us hanging. Great job!
~KC

Ah! Faramir is so cute! You've really brought out the toddlerishness of the whole situation, through his speaking style and his actions and his thoughts. There were bits of conversation that wern't clear to me until I'd read them a couple times, but the rest was superb. Keep it up!
~KC

Very well written, I liked it very much. You've got the realism of the characters down pat and you are good with dialogue and interaction. One thing I found a bit cumbersome was keeping up with all the names you called them. Sometimes it was two different names in one sentence for the same person. I realize this is for variety, and it's good, but you're overdoing it a tad bit. Pick a main name and use that often, interchanging the others sparingly.

Otherwise it was wonderful. I would suggest spending a bit more time on exactly how he came in through L-space, because had I not read the summary I wouldn't have known. Good job. Looking forward to reading more.
~KC

Glad to see you're continuing this! But the 'crumpled parchment' has me intrigued, and what Denethor is planning sounds... deliciously cunning. Again, Faramir is adorable, and the parallels between Vetinari and Denethor the II is almost creepy...

“Rufus,” he said calmly. “I don’t care who you have to kill, what you have to destroy, or where you have to go, but if you value your life, never let Captain Carrot get his hands on this.”

HAHA! Although I am in misery that this fantastic story has ended, the ending was perfect and brilliant. Nice use of humour by introducing the dreaded theme of Sues... but I wish Vetinari showed a little more compassion towards Denethor's death.

Very well done! IO loved the first chapter!

From the Captain Carrot remark and all the others, I would surmise this was Return of the King they were seeing. A terrible thing that happened to Denethor, good that wuffles is keeping Havelock sane. I guess that sincethe movie was showing something that was actually happening somewhere, recent history really, it would present less of an opening for the Things from the Dungeon Dimensions (Ungoliant, Mary Sues and the like).

This is an interesting story. I never read a LotR/Discworld crossover before but I like it. Faramir and Vetinari are two of my favorite characters so I hope there will be more of them.

I continue to enjoy this greatly. I was at first a little confused by the virtual timeline, but I guess the L-Space aspect means that Vetinari's time can be 'stretched' to accomodate Denethor's time in L-Space. I would love to see you continue this further.

Hi! Great to see you have written a second chapter! And what a delightfull one it is! I love this view of Havelock Vetinari, and I love the idea that Faramir could loose himself in the L-Space in his youth and just happen to end up on the disc. Especially I like your use of the L-Space formulae as way to separate the cpater parts. Greatly, greatly done! More of this, please!

Aislynn

This is great! Must be the best Discworld / lotr fic I've read in aeons. Please, keep this coming, i'm begging you. How about a little Machievelli's The Prince dropped in ?