 mercutio-rane 2006-10-23 . chapter 1Somewhere along the way in the past year or so, I remember reading this quickly. Now I come across it again and gave it the time it deserved and am so glad that I did.
What a beautiful piece! Alive and so full of the heartbreak and sweetness that makes Fruits Basket such great entertainment. It's beautifully written, totally believable, perfectly IC, and fits into the world in a way that feels so right.
I love your Hatori and Shigure, and the line where Tohru says they don't talk much about their parents...it opens you up to this world and you ran with it in the best of ways. Bravo! |
 Otaku Mom 2006-04-13 . chapter 1wonderful Story! I'm so glad I read it. I love the way you portray Hatori and Shigure. |
 Laily 2005-10-23 . chapter 1My tears welled up upon reading this story-it is so good! The bond between Hatori and Shigure, the understanding that came to pass between them, the unspoken words relayed instead in smiles and small gestures, the turbulents emotions, well-hidden yet so apparent to one another-you weaved every little detail like a tapesty. Thank you for such a wonderful read. |
 Raberba girl 2005-06-20 . chapter 1This fic is excellent. You characterized Hatori very well, but I was even more impressed with the meaning and significance you instilled in a story with no action. |
 spotlight101 2005-05-17 . chapter 1 Thanx Bunches! It was great! I love it when ppl show that there's more to Shigure than Takaya lets on. Shigure is deep! Thanx for bringing that to everyone's attention |
 RavingBabbit 2005-04-05 . chapter 1o.o; aMaZinG
Really. |
 PerennialOutlander 2005-01-28 . chapter 1absolutely spiffing! can't wait for the next! |
 hi 2005-01-28 . chapter 1 i pretty sure that hatori's father was the old head of family before akito, just though you'd like to know |
 Nikki Greenleaf 2005-01-27 . chapter 1Oh I love it. That was such a well-written little fic! :D Going straight to my favourites. |
 Yuki KIKI 2005-01-27 . chapter 1Wow. Just... wow... That fic left me speechless. The way you portray thought and emotion is stunningly beautiful- The use of such simple gestures to portray such a powerful underlying message... Wow... I'm honestly at a lack of words here... I swear that last line made my heart skip a beat... ^^; Seriously though, this is undoubtably the best fanfic I've read in quite some time, and I'm definently going to check out your other works. |
 Rashaka 2005-01-26 . chapter 1Very very interesting. Well written, certainly. But... refreshingly plausible and in-character as well. A wonderful one-shot in a fandom whose fanfiction tends to be almost unbelievably bad given the quality of the series itself. |