I love Remus too! Hehe! I can't wait to see what happens to the betrayers! This is a very good story. It touches on things that most people don't even think about. :) I can't wait to see more!

*sniffs* how beautiful! Its written so well and...I hope you continue soon! (and you better! 'The end'is not in my vocabulary!)

This one was easy to guess! Sirius! I'm so glad that he isn't dead and that Remus wasn't really a bad guy! Yay! I love Remus! Woohoo! I hope they all get revenge on those (worse than) traitors! Great chapter! Yay!

Oh. I get it now Dumbledore manipulated Remus and Harry thinks Remus betrayed him because of it. Okay I just had to be sure. Well once againg another great chapter I can't wait to see the next one.

You depress me. :'( Oh well, great chapter! I'm assuming the point of view this is told from is Lily's. Am I right? Anyways, I lurve this story and I can't wait for the secrets to unfold! :) Yay!

This chapter was really good. I have a few questions just so i'm completely clear on this. Is the crystal eyed angel Luna lovegood? Who is the bubbly professor? Is the creature that pretended to be a man Remus Lupin? And the last one is the hoard of red-headed demons the weasleys?

go on!

I'm really liking this story alot, so far. I like the journal entry though it is kinda sad that Harry thought that about himself. I would have never guessed the sorting hat. That's a very ingenious idea. Great chapter!

I have no idea who the other person in but I think he's planning on leaving a diary or something so someone could bring him back to help protect people in the future. Sounds interesting, if my guess is right. :) Great chapter! Very insightful on human nature. :)

Cool!

I believe the second person is Dumbledore. You give away a lot of hints in it. Like the part about "(well, I suppose someone as old as yourself has seen a great deal)" and "You know what I have in mind (you always know what is in my mind) … Ever wise you truly are." I dont know what they are planning but I think it has something to do with leaving apart of himself and Dumbledore behind so if someone needs there knowledge on a matter they can get it. So anyway I like your writing a lot of thoughts make sense and are rather interesting. I cant wait to see what you write next.

I think the other *person* is the sorting hat. as for what they are planning... sorry can't give a guess, because I haven't got one. I really like this story, it's so different and very interesting. btw, I'm a Slyth

Poor, poor Neville! :'( Just like Peter but he actually had some power. It makes me so sad to think that there is any chance that he would join the ones who made his parents how they are.

I never actually thought about how his boggart would change. Something about the veil with all the people he cares about, maybe? Kind of like Molly Weasley with people dying. Makes me wonder.

I'm happy you're making this into a story (sortof). You're a very skilled writer. :)

Neat-O! Please update soon!

Sparkle! Please update soon!