Quite good. Short, but good.

Mm, the theme's slightly cliche'd, particulary given the couple, and I feel you give this a slightly fast rhythm that made it feel slightly programed. It's a good story though, with a few details that capture the moment well, but remember, in romance stories, characterization and knowlage of your cannon characters is what makes a story successful.

Cannon is not a law, but it helps to create more attractive stories when you work with it.

All in all, I give it an 8/10. :P Heh.

Rieka

absolutely...loved it!

Oh Kai and Rei, such a cute couple!

*sigh* Yet another delicious one-shot!

So very relaxing. Very beautiful! Indeed the ultimate relaxation during exams :p

Good work! Very romantic :)! I still absolutely *love* your one shots! They should give you even *more* exams, you seem to get *really* productive then! :p Just kiddin, you deserve a good break very soon!

Love, Lily

Keep up!