wow that was great i think he will tell her one day he's strong onthe inside but on the outside he's a dremer great job keep up the good work.

ahh...love...such a beautiful poem of your's. He will tell her one day though, I think. He is strong but only outside. He is a dreamer inside, like all of us...so he will tell her...

Aw...that's really good and sweet! He...so cute and sweet! Nice job.