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Andy
2007-02-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseand the rainbow of pens she owns lined up in their usual, almost somewhat anal, ROY G BIV order.

You don’t get to mess with Alexandra Eames and her colour co-ordination and live to make an epic of it. He’d learnt the hard way that while he knows art and artists, she knows colours and their complementariness. And her reason?

“I like colours.”

There was nothing more to it. Just a simple, three word clause. I. Like. Colours. No more, no less. No secret hidden agenda, no back-story. It was purely Eames. And he loved it.

This paragraph describes me to a T! Oh the number of times I have screamed at people who borrow my markers and return them out of order.
I loved your story! It is one of my favourites!
gerfan
2005-11-17
ch 1,
abusethat was great, I think you should write a sequel. I like Goren's observations, and it took me a minute to figure out the bodies where babies too. really awesome job
Muskoka Girl
2005-03-24
ch 1,
abuseWhat does he need to say? PLEASE write a sequel!
Adnawun
2005-02-18
ch 1,
abuseloved it and adored the style, idea and characterization.

Wonderful work.
moofiechewie
2005-02-11
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! I had a smile on my face the entire time. :) Excellent.
EmyJ
2005-02-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is a great story! It took me a while to understand that the 'bodies' were really the babies. Excellent job. I think a sequel is definitely in order, perhaps from Alex's POV when Bobby makes his 'confession'.
VivianeAeryn
2005-02-01
ch 1,
abuseI liked it,it was cute and sweet.
Thinker
2005-01-31
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really liked Goren's observation style, you wrote that really well. Thank you!
Kimber McLeod
2005-01-28
ch 1,
abuseVery nice, and very sweet. I really look forward to more!
Emsta
2005-01-27
ch 1,
abusei love it! thought it was good, and that the way you described the babies, making them sound like members of a line up, was ingenious.
autumngold
2005-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseThank you for writing this wonderful story!! Very touching!! I love Bobby's thoughts on the babies and his deep feelings for Alex!! Great story!!
Missy
2005-01-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseLoved it! Awesome story and very well written.
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