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| Erin 2005-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh are you going to update this... I really love this story, wish you would. Not alot of DonHuang stories out there, what theres like two? including this one. Yeah so um i just wanted to request that you ad more chapters! -nudge nudge- ^~ will be waiting! |
| bob the alcoholic 2005-05-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseaww, that was so sweet. i've always loved b.d. wongs acting, and S.V.U is his best yet. aesome story. cant wait for more |
| lazy 2005-03-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseIts ridiculous how much i love this fic but still its just perfect PLEASE keep it up! :3 |
| Lexi Jones 2005-03-09 ch 3, | abuseNice sweet story - never would of thought the two together but you made it work. |
| garretelliot 2005-03-09 ch 3, | abuseI am so anxious for an update, the story is going so well and I usually don't read much slash. I'm glad you slowed the tempo down a little. It's reading much smoother now. Keep up the good work. |
| AkatsukiBaddAss 2005-02-12 ch 2, | abuseOh that was just SO aborable! I love your story and i REALLY!! hope you continue soon! cause every time i come to look for good fanfics to read its all Elliot/olivia Alex/Olivia blah blah blah its like un original now... tho i do like Alex and Olivia together but i love stories with like Don, George, and Warner and people that dont get much love you Love to you! |
| garretelliot 2005-02-12 ch 2, | abuseI am loving this story' keep it going. The only problems I've seen so far are spelling and a slight tendency to jump pov before it feels like you've fully developed one character's thoughts. |
| AkatsukiBaddAss 2005-02-06 ch 1, | abuseOh please update soon this is so cute. i just LOVE it! Pretty please update soon~ |
| Sierra Windfire 2005-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hope that you decide to continue with this. You got off to a good start. There's a lot of story and plot development just in this chapter. |