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Reviews For: Secret Revealed

Erin
2005-12-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh are you going to update this... I really love this story, wish you would. Not alot of DonHuang stories out there, what theres like two? including this one. Yeah so um i just wanted to request that you ad more chapters! -nudge nudge- ^~ will be waiting!
bob the alcoholic
2005-05-24
ch 3, anon.
abuseaww, that was so sweet. i've always loved b.d. wongs acting, and S.V.U is his best yet. aesome story. cant wait for more
lazy
2005-03-12
ch 3, anon.
abuseIts ridiculous how much i love this fic but still its just perfect PLEASE keep it up! :3
Lexi Jones
2005-03-09
ch 3,
abuseNice sweet story - never would of thought the two together but you made it work.
garretelliot
2005-03-09
ch 3,
abuseI am so anxious for an update, the story is going so well and I usually don't read much slash. I'm glad you slowed the tempo down a little. It's reading much smoother now. Keep up the good work.
AkatsukiBaddAss
2005-02-12
ch 2,
abuseOh that was just SO aborable! I love your story and i REALLY!! hope you continue soon! cause every time i come to look for good fanfics to read its all Elliot/olivia Alex/Olivia blah blah blah its like un original now... tho i do like Alex and Olivia together but i love stories with like Don, George, and Warner and people that dont get much love you Love to you!
garretelliot
2005-02-12
ch 2,
abuseI am loving this story' keep it going. The only problems I've seen so far are spelling and a slight tendency to jump pov before it feels like you've fully developed one character's thoughts.
AkatsukiBaddAss
2005-02-06
ch 1,
abuseOh please update soon this is so cute. i just LOVE it! Pretty please update soon~
Sierra Windfire
2005-01-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseI hope that you decide to continue with this. You got off to a good start. There's a lot of story and plot development just in this chapter.
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