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ProudMarineWife
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
*snicker* thats fantastic
polrobin
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
I am sitting in my office, laughing out loud and scaring the dog.

That was just too, too funny. "Oh, that's Pete."

OMG!

Nicely done.
icecreamgal31
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
hahaha love it!
Curuchamion
2008-07-05 . chapter 1
wow. I am amazed. And, yeah--the last line had me laughing too.
Ravenfur
2007-11-10 . chapter 1
I love it. Awesome story! I love the parallels Jack draws (coughcreatescough) between his fish and co-workers. I totally love the Pete-insertion too. Great work!
marislily
2007-05-14 . chapter 1
This is so funny. Liked it so much! Good job!
jackwabbit
2007-05-08 . chapter 1
Got a giggle out of me!
Transgenic-girl
2007-03-23 . chapter 1
Roflmao.
I love that last line.
xfirefly9x
2007-03-21 . chapter 1
Hehe! I love it! Especially no fish for Daniel cuz he ascended and the last bit! =P

“What. the hell. is that?” Daniel pointed towards a sucker fish that swooped down out of the shadows barely missing ‘Carter’ and attached itself to the front of the tank. Its wide round mouth was sucking frantically at the algae that had collected on the glass.

Jack turned and looked over his shoulder at Daniel who had crinkled his nose in disgust.

“Oh, that’s Pete.” He said mildly and walked out the door.
Zeki Young
2007-03-04 . chapter 1
Ha that made me giggle, cool fic.
Zk.
Janiqua
2007-02-03 . chapter 1
I can't get over this story! It is too hilarious! I have tears in my eyes right now, I'm laughing so hard!
Hikaru Kosuzaku
2007-01-23 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I loved that! LOVES!
Lila Mae
2006-09-18 . chapter 1
Oh! That was great! *snort* That is SO something I can see Jack doing... ;)
~*~Lila Mae
Sunny Duck
2006-08-15 . chapter 1
Oh, now THAT is funny!!
dark3princess
2006-08-11 . chapter 1
omg...that was brilliant! 'that was pete' that sumed it up for me...yes. yeah, loved how you put the characters as fish. it seems perfect for sam to have a pretty swishy tail, lol. LOVE IT!
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