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| Raging Raven 2008-04-21 ch 5, | abuseThis is a great story. I would love to read more if you ever get the chance to write and update. |
| KoshKing777 2007-11-22 ch 5, | abuseaww, cliffhanger! this is an enjoyable American Pie fic so far, especially the jokes involving Stifler's sister. Him checking her out and nearly chucking, I could so see him doing that. |
| Good_Gal 2007-11-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseI can't wait till you write the next one! PLEASE DO IT SOON! |
| RKO-2005 2007-06-13 ch 5, | abuseAwesome story so far. Can't wait for the update. |
| Andy K 2007-05-14 ch 5, anon. | abuseDamn, man! That storyline kicks **! Two tiny criticisms though. One; unlike the start of every American Pie, there's no real shock moment, like 'Illegal Channels' in Pie 1, or the restaurant blow in the Wedding. Two; If Oz is still with Heather, where is she? She appeared at the lake house in 2, and she had a valid excuse as to where she was in the rest of the movie. If you continue with the story, you have to have big moments like the lesbian scene, or Nadia on the net. Also, it wouldn't be a proper Pie without the MILF guys and Stifler's brother. Overall, this is amazing. Finch still retains that wit, Kevin is a lot like he was in the originals, and Stif;er is once again pure Stifler. |
| KayKrissi 2007-02-23 ch 5, | abuseFunny. Stiffler is crazy. |
| KayKrissi 2007-02-22 ch 1, | abuseOne girl, four guys...big trouble. lol. I like it. |
| xxBellaCullenxx 2007-02-16 ch 5, | abusethats just great stifler checkin out his sister! great. |
| xxBellaCullenxx 2007-02-16 ch 4, | abusethis story is soo priceless! i love it! it so great i hope you update soon! |
| xxBellaCullenxx 2007-02-15 ch 2, | abusethis is just great! |
| xxBellaCullenxx 2007-02-13 ch 1, | abuselovin it |
| LustfulPear 2007-01-21 ch 5, | abuseCool story so far. Please update soon. =] |
| IHeartJensen 2007-01-07 ch 5, | abuseawesome i wish you would update |
| nate luv me 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abusestifler said hows it goin ** face in the movie! |
| gothcarms 2006-07-25 ch 5, anon. | abusePlease Update! |