Dude, That's freaking... how do you say? "depressing". I mean come on. I refuse to believe even a fat headed retard child would do this to himself and yet this kid goes along and slashes his wrists a grand total of eight times. Are you like this? If so, follow the character of this story's example and do us all a favor.

the story was touching yet sad ...the innocence and the curiousity of the child does become fatal and honestly this is the first time i come across a concept such as this which makes it unique.The sad part about the story is "THE LITTLE BOY FELT HE SHOULD NO LONGER LIE AND SO HE TRIED TO FIND WHAT THE ELDERS HAD SEEN NOT KNOWING THAT TO THEM ITSELF IT WAS NOTHING BUT A FANTASY"
i guess one should always be honest!!the child may misinterpret it and may feel lonely and it may lead to serious consequences like it is here.

There doesnt seem to be any middle ground for yoru writting is there. Its either very happy, or in this case, horridly dark. Awsome.

Wow, even with this just being a fanfic, are you ok man? I go to a military school, aka we have a lot of cutters... Just be careful man, nice descriptions good fic, just tell me its only a fic