That's so beautuful, I couldn't stop reading!
It's very well written, it totally caught my attention and it goes well with the original story too.
And I also must say I nearly prefer this ending to the real one! :-D
I wish I could draw it... Actually I could, but it would be really a long long job and I'm not sure I have all that time! :-(
Thank you so much for writing this, really! :-D

Dude, they just don't catch a break. I was wondering whether she had her ki back to normal or not.

This was the most chaotic chapter of the whole chapter, at least at first. All in all, a really awesome read.

Wow, what a way to write it. I would've probably returned the favor that Herb gave me, but there would be no way I'd go as far as him. Nice characterzation.

Hilarous, Ryoga is still thinking that Ranma is thinking like a man, not a girl. Lol!

I'd just like to tell you that I thought that was absolutely fantastic. A wonderful piece of writing. I was enthralled throughout the story and honestly did not expect to be. Thank you very much for the story.

Creative and a good read

Hope to see the sequel soon.

Good story, can't say I was really looking for a sequal though. Its not really my style but for once I was kind of hoping for a happy ending, I think its just cause I have a bit of a thing for ranma-chan and ryouga. Anyway good story.

This was a really good read. I look forward to "Aftermath" and congratulate you on a job well done!

Oh, I get it. So, the visions that Ryoga saw will be in the sequel. Wait, Ranma's back? I thought he died. And they went to war? Man, there are so many questions in my head. Can't wait for the sequel.

It's always interesting to dive back into the archives and read something that you haven't seen for awhle. Though, considering how long it's been, the odds of a sequal are slim, this story was still a good read.

Good luck with any other works in the works

Lathis

ah ive been waiting for the sequel... will it ever come?(PLEASE keep writing)

I think you is awsome...uh...me mean...story is awsome...uh...I mean...You and your story are awsome! Now, I shall babble nonsense.

yay sequal lol

Ha evil ranma is funny he has an evil villian hand book