How...How wonderful...I APPLAUD to this one. This is a masterpiece!

Hi! I was browsing through your stories... I'm a big Naruto fan, really... And, I'm saying not to get your attention but because it's true, you're one of my favorite Naruto Fan Fiction writers... You write cute and sweet love stories, you don't exaggerate the story. I love your stories especially this one... So I decided to browse more of your stories and I realized that you are a Filipina, too, just like me. Ikinasaya ko na ang aking paboritong manunulat ay isang Pilipina. Nalaman ko ito sa "Alamant ng Payless" at iba pang kwento mo. Gusto ko sana magrequest ng isang NaruHina fan fic [Kung pwede po, English]...

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THANKS :))

Sweet. :D

Amazing writing...great ending for such a cool story. Very romantic! Super well written. Thank you.

Wow! What a wonderful and sad story:) I loved the entire story so far...but the ending is frustrating. Superb writing. I will go ahead and read the chap #2...and see what happens.

Beautiful

This was the most beautiful NaruHina story that I had pure and innocent ,from my point of view the ending was heartbroken but in the same time end reminded me of a Korean drama named "Jumong",when Jumong becomes king his love Soseono decides to leave to another country after she helped him accomplish his if she loved him dearly she choose to leave because that away she will stop the arguing for the throne by Jumong s son and her children...the end was so sad T_T You should watched it is very beautiful

So Im so glad you wrote another chapter (the author note said you were gonna leave it at the last one) but yay! You didnt! And ending was so amazing. I actually started to cry (but Im kind of a big baby anyways) but when Naruto asked her to be his wife and explained why, I bursted into tears. It was so beautiful and the concept of that sad kind of happiness, the selfless love she had for him was so beautiful and true to her. I love it. Amazing story :)

*sniff* soo wonderfull.. i just loved this 3

Love it I read it like two times :*

i can't believe i haven't reviewed this fic. anyway, i adore this story. it gave me funny aches in my chest and it also made me smile. i can read it over and over again and still not get over it. [i'm sorry if i sound mushy... it's way past my bedtime so... *shrugs* :D]

This is such a lovely, lovely story, and I love it with all my heart. It gave me the happy kind of sadness and the happy kind of happiness. By far, I believe, this is my most favorite NH story.

Thank you so much for sharing this warm, endearing story! You're an amazing writer, really. (':

Damn, very nice!

I must apologise for my earlier review. On the day I reviewed, this fic appeared to be a one-shot. Indeed, I couldn't access the second chapter until today. I'm very sorry about the confusion and hope you'll forgive me.

On to chapter 2. You did wrap it up and did a very good job at that, but you still left me wanting for more. No problems were solved, no truths acknowledged and no wrong righted. I see Hinata's lie as a betrayal of both herself and of Naruto, even if it was done with the best of intentions. Intentions aren't everything, you know? The results matter a lot. In this case, having them talk out that part would've sweetened the whole story a lot. Are you leaving things unsaid because you find it somewhat poetic? I don't know. I'm only one voice out of many, but I for one wished more happened. Perhaps your 'epilogue' will sweeten the deal? I certainly hope so. I really loved this story. That is why I hope for so much.

Thanks for sharing.

You're a really mean person for not putting an angst or tragedy warning on this fic. You have no right to hide information from people and then let them feel sad after reading your story. It's their choice, isn't it? Don't feel bad for my words. Instead, put a warning on the fic. It's just too sad and definitely unfair to all your readers.