D amazing

awesome.

This was so EXCELLENT.

It seems like the wrong word to describe it, but I, like Naruto, are hopelessly short on vocabulary...xD

You wrote Hinata's feelings so well, and Naruto's obliviousness. You kept them both in character, which is a feat that many, if not most, NaruHina writers fail at. (Myself included, seriously).

THANK YOU so much for being a writer. This fiction is really, truly amazing.

aww SAD CHAPPIE!

keep up da good wrk! chekk out my fanfic. naruhina as well ;D

it wasn't bad, it, just...confused me. im srry, but i didn't like wasnt as juicy as i thought it would be either.

sorry.

this was very well written and very good i like enjoyed it alot

I've read this fic maybe about 20 times now...and I LUV IT! This is definitely one of my all time favorites!

Simply beautiful. It was actually the happy epilogue that made me sniffle. And I thought the additional detail with the flags flying off after their wishes were granted was simply delightfully fitting.

And I'd just like to comment that no one could call Naruto the "Kyuubi boy" without dire punishment, and that none of the kids knew, at age 12, that he had the demon sealed in him.

those flags were an interesting idea! I love the end:

"All their lives, they lived with a happy kind of sadness.

Perhaps it was high time for them to feel what it was like to have a happy kind of happiness."

That...was quite possibly one of the most beautiful and poetic endings I've ever read. I absolutely adored the symbolism with the flags, and how you used them as a reoccuring metaphor/symbol/whatever you wanna call it.

It's so touching, and Hinata's pure devotion is so sweet. That's the very reason why I love Naruhina so much. And Naruto is such a sweetheart, especially with

“Well, you could stay here in Konoha and I’ll make you forget him.”

I swear, if it wasn't past midnight right now, I'd've squealed.

This was a wonderful use of my time! Thank you for sharing your gift of writing with us who love to read!

The story was so sweet, it made me cry! o_O!

Oh my goodness, this is incredibly cute. I absolutely love it. D

I LOVE THIS FREAKIN' STORY IT MAKES ME LAUGH AND SMILE GIVE YOURSELF A PAT ON THE BACK

That was insanely amazing. It's one of my favourite Naruto fics out there...

I have to check out the sequel!