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Chubby-King-Chocobo
2009-07-02 . chapter 45
As for the late review, I remember reading it as soon as I noticed the new post (and e-mail ^^), but for some reason was unable to write a proper responce due to not having anything to say...and now I remember why.

What a dramatic cliff hanger right at a crucial part of the story too! All these tensions building up then -that- happens. Who was it? I want to say Ashtarote/the dark being that snuck into his chambers in the last chapter... Ahh, Ashtarote, I have grown very fond of him. I find myself a sucker for the 'loyal friend whom-they-might-have-had-a-history-with' types like him and Oriya.

I am really anticipating the later chapters with a bleeding heart. The judges warning to Hisoka that things will become even more of a trial for all of them from now on makes me wonder how much worse it could still get--but alas since it is the brilliance that is you I very much am looking forward to read it.
RosePetalDreams
2009-06-15 . chapter 45
I know that every author has at least a general idea of their story, and the timing of the plotline. However, this issue has been going on for how many chapters now and there's no resolve in sight? Every time you fix one problem, you bring in another. Is there ever going to be any solution? I love this story, but even I'm getting to be a little bit discouraged and mildly annoyed. There's just pile after pile of problems that occur in this story. While all of them are related, there isn't really any solid connection or a feasable scenario where one solution will make everything all better. Every chapter brings on a whole new round of problems. I just want to see things resolved. I want to see things change for the better, not continue getting worse. Maybe I'm mistaken, or maybe you're building all these horrible things to a single peak before the world you've built comes crashing down around us. I don't know. I just want a chapter where something DOESN'T go to hell. Can't there just be one?
Dark Inu Fan
2009-05-22 . chapter 45
Ah, yet again, a dramatic stopping point! I really must say, your writing style is wonderful and engaging, I just wish that you continue healing so we can find out what happens next! Though, I wonder, is Hisoka technically an angel now? I can easily see Konoe or Tatsumi becoming the next Enma. Ah, the Shokon group are all heading toward separate destinies, I just hope that they are able to stay as a family though others want to tear them apart. Keep up the good work, dark
BokuraNoLoveStyle
2009-05-05 . chapter 45
Ah! I missed this story! It is so magnificent and I'm so glad you updated, it had me on the edge of my seat the whole time and now I'm wondering what lessons Hisoka has to learn and what's going to happen now that Abigor was stabbed...which means Tsuzuki would have to go to the pits of hell if abigor dies! NU! Hahah please update soon neh?
Deviliscious
2009-05-04 . chapter 45
Ahh my lovely! You're back! I have missed you so much! I'm extremely glad that you're feeling much better. Don't push yourself though. And just take it easy my dear; the wedding will come soon enough ^__^

Your latest chapter... Have I told you how evil you are, leaving me hanging there like that? But that's what drives me crazy about you xD Anyways, a good chapter. My god, how could things become so sour between Ab and Ash? But lucky Ab that he still has Caer! Go Caer! Lol. I'm itching to know what Tsuzuki's decision is. Surely he won't leave Hisoka. Besides, Ab has decided to take his place. But... I dunno, that sort of ending would just be too predictable... Hmm... -goes of to ponder-

In any case, another job well done. You take it easy now, you hear?

Love lots,
Dev
Nagaku Tsuzuku Yami
2009-05-04 . chapter 45
Hi PJ Zatken XD

Excellent chapter by the way, had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. I'm guessing that the one who attacked Abigor was Enma? Though the attack hit Tsuzuki as well, just not as bad as it did Abigor. I really hope they're going to be okay and poor Tsuzuki, thats not going to do well for his sanity or whatever is left of his sanity.

And I'm glad that you're feeling better, well better then you probably felt before. And I hope that you get well soon and that your health co-operates with you.

Ohh, and my profile name is no longer 'Kantra' lol, it's 'Nagaku Tsuzuku Yami'

Again, get well soon :)
RuByMoOn17
2009-05-04 . chapter 45
it's good to know your back!
Deviliscious
2008-11-23 . chapter 44
Another wonderful chapter! And you're back! It's dreadful to hear of you being sick and I hope that you'll get better soon. And no, I don't mean for you to get better just so you can churn out more fantastic chapters for your adoring (sometimes psychotic) fans. Although that wouldn't be a bad thing xD

Lol, seriously, you take it easy hun. Your health is more important. So take your time and make sure to get plenty of rest. Don't rush with your fics because I won't be going anywhere and will continue to wait patiently for each lovely update.

Lots of love,
Dev
Oro-kun
2008-11-10 . chapter 44
Excellent chapter. Rather did enjoy reading it. I do hope you get well soon, will be cheering you on during your recovery from being sick. So ya get well soon, and take your time with your fanfics, we can wait. You're health is more important. And can't wait to read what you have instore for us with the next chapter (repeat it again don't rush we'll wait... your health comes first).
Nagaku Tsuzuku Yami
2008-11-10 . chapter 44
Wow, such a wonderful chapter. Poor everyone, they're all overly stressed and not to mention hurt and some are angry. Curious though who the new player of the story is? And more curious as to what Tsuzuki's decision will be. And the archangel, i wonder how he's going to treat Tsuzuki with the fact that Tsuzuki is a Primordial? Oh can't wait until the next update.

And I hope you get well soon.
RuByMoOn17
2008-11-10 . chapter 44
another great chap XD.

I hope you get better soon! *hugs and kisses*
fuko112
2008-11-08 . chapter 43
where is the next chapter's i gotta read please don't be cruel
BokuraNoLoveStyle
2008-08-21 . chapter 43
ACK! So I just spent two days reading Kyoto File Revisited and this story and omg you are such a glorious writer! I really hope more chapters will be added soon I really wanna know what happens at the end and if Hisoka and Tsuzuki stay together. But I'm sure you hear a lot of that from ppl (yes i am another fangirl)

But your writing is just...wow. I could never come up with something as detailed and in depth as this one is.

so keep up the good writing and I cannot wait for more!
Deviliscious
2008-08-12 . chapter 43
My deepest apologies for the long absence! -hugs and gives cookies- Life has a way of catching up with me but I have not forgotten you or your wonderful fic! A great update (or updates rather, since I missed a chapter or two lol) as always. Does this mean Abigor is taking Tsuzuki's place as a Primordial? It's like, one one hand, I would prefer if Tsuzuki takes his rightful place (and be with Muraki, but that's just me fangirling xD) but on the other hand, I don't want him and Hisoka to part (even though I would prefer Tatsumi over Hisoka >_
RosePetalDreams
2008-08-10 . chapter 43
Well, at least Tsuzuki won't have to go back, thanks to Abigor. He and Hisoka can continue being a cute little couple and help make sure everything doesn't get destoryed. HOWEVER, I have this feeling that things aren't going to be as simple as Abigor taking Tsuzuki's place. Something always seems to go wrong. And someone please get Watari's butt back! I did like the chapter and I can't wait for more!

Luvs and cuddles
RosePetal
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