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qwerty
2008-05-05
ch 1, anon.
abusepause

*bawling*

OMG!! so sweet! good job! you were so right - when i read the last scentence, the air i was breathing got caught in my throat. Damn, *tears leaking out of my eyes* your good.
Aerliin Skylarre
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseAw...
Dally Johnny=
NeverletRocknRollDie
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseI loved this story! I cried though it was really good!
UnofficialHatred
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseHeey,

I kinda feel like an outsider myself right now because I didn't cry and wasn't close to.!,anywayz that stroy was awesome and defenitly one of my favorites!Thanks so much for writing it!Also can anyone please read and reveiw my story "What Would Dally Say?"

~Thanks,..Stay Gold!
green.pepsi.cola
2006-07-28
ch 1,
abuseForget the last line making me cry. The whole thing made me cry. You have got talent.
angeloves1
2006-05-13
ch 1,
abusei loved it
love angel
Vertigo Showgirl
2006-01-01
ch 1,
abuseOmg, that really did make me cry! ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!
goldenpony
2005-05-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseplease update.I love this fic.
Jessie13
2005-05-24
ch 1,
abuseHey, this was really good. Keep up the good work.
Marauders3
2005-04-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseaw...the last line did make me cry...;( I'm all teary eyed now...
mischeif-maker
2005-03-14
ch 1,
abusethere is nothing i have to say to you except maby . . . . A A A A A A W W W W W W W W W W W W W W W W W!
Lifelike
2005-02-23
ch 1,
abuseOhh. =whimper= Very cute. :) I liked it a lot. Both were in character (which is more than I can say for myself) and the atmosphere was lovely.

Keep writing!
-Rachel
Kairyuu-san
2005-02-19
ch 1,
abuseAwh! That's a nice one-shot . . .

About the format of the story, I'd like to say thanks, because you actually made the paragraphs correctly, which so many people fail to do nowadays. And, you used correct grammar! Yay! Keep it up!
Not-that-kinda-gurl
2005-01-29
ch 1,
abuseIt seriously does make you cry. I love it. It's beautiful.
Corbin4eva
2005-01-29
ch 1,
abuseOMG! tear-jerker! I LOVE IT! that was so sweet! great stroy!
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