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Reviews For: Of Red and Blue

Yuna Luna 78
2007-07-13
ch 1,
abuseI didn't know they had Azure dreams stories here. I liked what you did, even if it's destined to be incomplete.
bye.
nene
2005-02-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's pretty good, but are you ever going to update? I saw your old story; are you going to let this one die too?
Shadow Kitty
2005-02-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseA good begining, would like to see more. The monsters for the game where great.
Gibson18
2005-01-30
ch 1,
abuseIt's a good story. Written very descriptively and I like how you continue the grudge with Ghosh onto Weedy. This story has potential, and you already presented an interesting question at the start: What happened to Koh? I think a few good chapters would entail what had happened to the girls after Koh's disappearance. Just a suggustion. Also, thank you for your critique on my story.
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