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| Yuna Luna 78 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI didn't know they had Azure dreams stories here. I liked what you did, even if it's destined to be incomplete. bye. |
| nene 2005-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's pretty good, but are you ever going to update? I saw your old story; are you going to let this one die too? |
| Shadow Kitty 2005-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseA good begining, would like to see more. The monsters for the game where great. |
| Gibson18 2005-01-30 ch 1, | abuseIt's a good story. Written very descriptively and I like how you continue the grudge with Ghosh onto Weedy. This story has potential, and you already presented an interesting question at the start: What happened to Koh? I think a few good chapters would entail what had happened to the girls after Koh's disappearance. Just a suggustion. Also, thank you for your critique on my story. |