Holy crap. That is sad. Really sad. I'm on the verge of tears right. My god, it's sad. And really well written. That's was so well written. Keep up the good work.

Aw. So sad.

I like this

hm..not finished..i really like this, very sweet and touching

I just love your intospective ficlets! They're just so... good!

The third-to-last paragraph in parentheses sorta ruined it for me, somehow.

And the 'list' of all the times Jiraiya DIDN'T give up on Orochimaru, plus the line of when he DID, was just awesome.

Thank you. Thank you very, very much. The parallels between the two teams aren't exploited nearly enough, and though there are definite differences (Tsunade was most definitely not in love with Orochimaru and Jiraiya wasn't in love with Tsunade), but the close-knit nature of the teams is an amazing mirror.

...so you...won't continue?

il n'y a pas de fin = there is no ending, am I correct?

It was lovely in a depressing way...

O.O ::Worship!::

WOW!! That was incredibly well written! I love the parallel you drew between them all! And especially the part where Jiraiya hadn't given up on Orochimaru until after NAruto was in the hospital! This was a really great read and incredibly well written.

And yes--Sasuke-kun WILL be coming back! Or I start a war with Kishimoto. -.- (Wow, foxes really ARE fickle and capricious. o.o; )

"(il n’y a pas de fin.)"
so you're continuing it?
Yay!

personally, I belive Sasuke will return, but with a few more mental problems than before he left.

great fic~ Can't wait for the next installment!

i liked the fic. i think that nothing good will ever come out of saving Sasuke. He doesn't deserve to be saved. and im glad someone besides me sees the resemblace between team 7 and Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Orochimaru.

that was very good. i liked how you focused on the similarities and differences between jiraiya and naruto, orochimaru-sama and sasuke-kun, all from jiraiya's perspective. 'cause you know, that's what i find really interesting about "naruto", the possiblity of history repeating itself. i loved your story, good job!

It sounds good, I can't wait to see where this story gos.

This rocked. You rock. The End.

that was really good.

it makes me even more impatient to read the manga and see what's happening!

i really love jiraiya and i like reading his POVs with regards to sasuke and naruto and orohcimaru.

good work on this one. well-written.

Again: wah.

"But Naruto is not the fox, merely its cage, and so he has fidelity that lasts a lifetime."

*heart*

I love it when you write. That's all I have to say.