It was beautiful. But Hermoine's stronger than that and it would be cool to put a religious twist on there.

:'(
in fact, :'(
so sad...
but beautiful all the same.
okay, need to read something fun now to stop myself feeling suicidal!
r x

i sometimes feel sad too, after writing a sad fic. but the world isnt all happiness is it? and sometimes the sadness in us has to come out.

that was a beautiful fic. i knew it was about harry and hermione the moment i read the first word. it was so sad. and sweet. i, too, love the rain. but for different reasons.

the poem in the beginning was beautiful. it expressed all of hermione's feelings.

great fic.

awe. awe. THAT IS SO SAD. i don't normally like H/Hr but that was really touching. I like the thing about the rain, about the way he was crying for her. It was so sweet. It's strange how sometimes it's the things you hate writing which turn out best isn't it?

oh my gosh! that was such a heartbreaking story.. it almost made me cry.. and im not one to cry so easily. I really like the way you described everything, and balanced the flashbacks together so they fit. Really good job! Keep it up!

i loved it! ^-^

so sweet.. i really want to see another chapter to this one-shot, maybe when you have time.

i know this is, as i said above, a one-shot but it would be great to see the point of view of ron ^^:

I don't know why you hated writing it, because I personally thought it was bautiful. I'm open to all sorts of writing, (depending on my mood at the moment,) but I can always tell when a work of literature, whether fanfiction or poetry, is beautiful, and yours almost made me cry! You're really good at conveying the characters feelings through your words, and forcing the reader to feel these motions and analize them...then again, I'm 14. What'do I know? Just thought I'd let you know that your fic was wonderful, and ask you if you wrote that poem or someone else did...I might like to base one of my own fanfics, (different, but with the same idea)off of it... could you email me, even if the answer is no? I'd really appreciate it, but if you don't I won't pester you- hey, I get it I write too! ;) Great work!

That was so sad. I'm crying! Lol, which is hard cuz I'm trying to talk to my aunt on the phone and she's all 'why are you crying?'. Wonderful fic!

depressing but great