that was great. i like it. i think i laughed for ten minutes when all that stuff happened at the temple. good job. i'm gonna get my little sister to read it. i think she'll laugh too. again Good job and congrats.

AW i cried at the last two chapters because Tatsuha and Hiro didn't end up together :'( :( :'( ... WA WWA

WAHH! (It seems like I've read this before..) WAH!! I like how it ended but I HATE that they weren't together in the end. WAAH! There should be like a sequel or something!!

YES!! Finally, a story in which Hiro-kun gets married to Ayaka-chan!!
I loved your story! It was very interesting, it held my attention (an amazing feat, I assure you), and has quite a bit of depth. Great job! ^_^

I was on the edge of my seat this whole story. It made me cry :(. Good Job!

such a nice story. thanks for the experience =]

This is very good :) I like the dialogues. Actions of characters are sometimes very... um... chaotic and unexpected, but hell, life itself is that way (i know it well). It was somehow refreshing and absolutely original ;) So, yes, it was VERY good. Go on like this ;)

And sorry for bad english, it's not my language...

Btw: I appreciated that I could only guess how it will end up. I don't like too transparent plot ;)

Heehee. This is truly excellent. o.o And the ending? I loved it. x3

*thumbs up*

Heh... I'm kinda late reviewing. o.o But that's okay. I just love this story.

That's the end?! How sad. Tatsuha is really something. He never seizes to surprise me. I think... I've fallen in love. Too bad Ryuichi has him, but let's face it. That couple is hot beyond words.

What?! S, Hiro just got married to Ayaka and didn't consider Tatsuha? Are they not going to end up together? They both loved two people but it seemed so sudden.

Ha ha. That's K for ya. How funny. That was so cruel for Tat's father to drug his son and try to get him married. What trickery. I'd never peak to him again. Ha ha. Just joking. But, he shouldn't have any reason to tell his son he'll disown him if he's betrayed his son like that. Tatsuha didn't want that and his father should be all for his happiness. And, those Usami parents. Man, they're ruthless.

Hiro needs to keep with the 'I want to stay with Tatsuha' thing. I think it'd be perfect. But, Hiro is hiding from his true feelings. Right?

How funny. Poor Yuki. It would be disturbing knowing his brother got it on in his bed. Ha ha. And, Hiro seemed desperate. Was that because of the engagement? Was it too sudden to hear about? How interesting. Hiro claims to love Ayaka and when she is supposed to get engaged he gets it on with her future fiance. I find that the most hilarious thing. And, Tatsuha's loving it. Ha ha.

Cliff hanger? Oh no! Oh well. I can always read the next chapter. I hope Hiro isn't mad at Tatsuha. That wouldn't be good.

How frusterating. Ayaka needs to realise Tatsuha doesn't want the marriage to happen. I thought she was more reasonable then that. In this chapter she certainly isn't. And, what about Hiro? Tatsuha needs to escape with him or something.