Sweet little story... Chris having a little sister... that's cute!
It's just a little sad that it all happened so fast at the end... I mean, with Piper and Leo find out, and the siblings disappearing... but anyway... I like it!
(Chrissy.W.x from the crazyDFFgang)

A little slow but good.

I just finished reading on friday and It's great the way Joey discovered her healing power was awesome...

This is one great storie. Wow way the go Zana.
its fun and realy keeps the thrill of the action going. Keep writing cant wait to read the second storie.

love, Jolijn (AngelDean)

*claps* Wow! What a fantastic ending! :D Joey finally gets a family! Aw. It was really interesting u had them come back into two different times, and nice to see some promising changes made from their time in the past. Such a cute ending with the Charades game. I liked very much. *grin*

Great story, I enjoyed reading it again!:) It's nice that Chris and Joey both remember what happened, and you wrote a very sweet family moment! Can't wait to read your sequel!

Yes, awsome update! So now Leo knows that Chris is his son and Joey's his daughter, great way of revealing the news, btw!

Aw, that's so sweet! Dronan and Gwen helped Joey and found each other! Great job!

I remember this chapter! I like Joey worrying about not telling her parents who she is and I like the battle scene, very cool!

You have a wonderful, lengthy, detailed story on your hands here. The characters are very likeable, and even grow and change (something that really should be implemented into a story of this length) which makes it all the more enjoyable. You've definately done your homework, and have left me a whole bunch of marvelous updates to catch up on. I love that Chris & Joey have their own little secret to keep now. The interaction between the two is cute. Keep it up. :)

This chapter is very funny! I can just see Phoebe reacting that way to Chris and Piper and Leo's little interactions are so cute!

Great update! I like Gwen and Dronan, they make a cute couple!

Great update! Chris is so sweet and nice to Joey and it's good that they can help each other! You're doing a great job!

I remember now, Wendy's Gwendolyn!;) Great update, Chris is so sweet watching over his sister!

Yay, Chris found out Joey's his sister! I really like Wendy, she's so cool!