i mean the story is pretty good, but your japanese part sucks...
i mean whats with all your character's name not inuyasha or kagome or sesshomaru, i mean the characters you made up like sekira or alerea of terea or something those are not japanese names! they do not sound like japanese names and they will never be japanese names!! and you have tons of japanese mispellings!! like what the hell is oswari?! its osUwari!! duh you idiot! and what the hell is wrong with sekira(stupid name by the way) calling sesshomaru, sesshomaru-dono? they are not in anyway equals! sekira is a servant, no? so she should be calling him sesshomaru-sama!! miroku or sango have better chances of addressing sesshomaru that! finally, what the ** is wrong with you! midoriko and inuyasha!! r u ** stupid or what!! shes like a thousand years older than him! and whats with her personality!! shes like a kagome on crack!! stupid, if you ask me...the only decent character you made up in there, is reimei, cuz i dont hate her yet(duh, she doesnt do anything exept cry and whatnot) but seriously, why a girl?!! it would have been better off if it was a boy, cuz that way sesshomaru would have a heir for sure!! and if you didnt know, girls cant be named heirs cuz when they get married, like if reimei got married to the prince of the northern kingdom, then she would be the princess of the northern kingdom, not the western...duh!! and how could she be princess of the western kingdom at the same time? your really stupid, and boys are better than girls in the japanese era(inuyasha time) stronger, and all that!! you need to learn more if your seriously planning on writing anymore stories, though i suggest you dont, cuz YOU SUCK AT IT!!
one more thing, dont count this as a review, its a something from a very ** of reader that hates your stories! hahaha

I like it! ^-^

Wonderful story. I have only one bone to pick with your style. The way you use the word "rather". NO. "rather he likes it or not" is wrong! wrong, wrong, wrong! "whether he likes it or not" it the correct word you were looking for. Other than that and some funny spelling, well done.

hey remember me? im bac 2 tell u im really sad u didnt pick my name suggestions but the 1 u chose was great also. another thing was a question

'iz that midiroku' (cant spell srry) that came out of the jewel?

ah thanks for the info and for replying back :D

i have a question. what happened to kagome's son? is he still alive?

wow i actually like this . i think its good heh

I just loved this stroy, I hope that you continue to keep writing For I look foward to reading more from you in the future

i have to say, although this stories concept is nice, it saddens me to know that you are of college age. This story not only is rushed in many parts, but is poorly structured, as well. Not only that but the development of the story makes so many large time/information jumps, and the whole thing is flat out sloppy.

I would admit however, that the story is a good one, just poorly written, it even appears as though it wasn't even revised either. I would advise maybe having this revised in the future b/c for someone of your age, this story's quality and structure, is comparable to something a middle schooler has written, and not someone of college education.

Found 'Midsummer's Eve' accidentally last night while searching for the date of this year's. Although I've not read any Inuyasha fanfics and am usually pretty set in thinking of Inuyasha & Kagome as a pair for some reason I was enticed to read. Perhaps because Sesshomaru was always my favorite character. Perhaps because in a roleplay with 'cosplays' in Gaia's breedables he is son-in-law to my Remus Lupin and I also care for (portray) one of his sons. Regardless, I have always wanted to see some great happiness for him as well as some softening without diminishing all that we love about him. On this you have exceeded expectations.
I love your story. I love how the characters stay IN character and I can believe their actions, emotions, and growth. I think you found a painful but wonderful way to bring Sesshomaru & Kagome together, and their growth together as a pair and as individuals was fantastic. The storyline in both kept me reading straight through both Midsummer & Midwinter -unable to put them down with wanting to see what happened next. I am glad for that I found them so late. ^_^
Thank you for giving Inuyasha someone even better for him than Kagome. Or Kikyo. ^_^ This story ended my favorite way: with happy endings all around.
There are still a lot of 'wrong word' spelling errors and missing spaces between words that do make it a bit hard to read at times, but that's nothing a good editing wouldn't fix. Like Kagome's last sentence "It was my MATE'S wish" there are many messed apostrophes too. If nothing else, That one should be fixed as it ends your tale.
As much as I loved the stories... there were many times I had to reread to see which 'he' or 'she' was now being referred -as if there were small partitions in the chapters that were missing and the parts moved one into the other without warning. On that same line sometimes it was easy to miss who was talking or being talked about. Also, some more visual description would really flesh these stories up a notch. On the times you DID describe things in more detail it is apparent you Can... perhaps you fell into a writer's typical 'trap' of seeing it so well in your own mind that details were left out? I know it's harder for me sometimes to remember them myself when I am focusing on getting the dialog and thoughts in character but it is still an important element.
Overall, I highly enjoyed your stories and will definitely be reading them again and again. Personally... I think I now prefer your stories' net results to the cannon. ;) But then I'm Sesshomaru biased and just want him to be happy. Which in your tale he clearly is. Danke. <3 oh and that bit at the end about a large part of love being respect? Awesome. <3
I have to agree with a previous comment I saw though... the way Sesshomaru & Kagome were going at it they would have lots more than just the two children. *laughs* At least until her eggs were used up. ;)
Thank you for a lovely set of stories.

Is Akatsuki still alive because of his taiyoukai curse?

wow this was really good can't wait for the next chapter!

Absolutely BRILLIANT!! This is the tenth time I've read Midsummers Eve and Midwinters Eve. I usually loathe Ses/Kag pairings but your story floored me. I was entranced by the way you captured the progress of the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Your writing style is enrapturing and as a writer myself, I've learned a lot from this series.Don't worry, I don't plagiarise. Do the world a favour and keep publishing. I love your work, all the best.

I loved this story. I hope you write more stories like this!

lol very interesting and i didn't know that this was the last chapter but it was good though i would like to know what the final battle turned out to be