The title of this isn't right. 'Archen am gwydr' means 'Shoes for glass'. If you meant 'Shoes of Glass' then 'Archen o Gwydr' is correct.

really good, i love all the names you use in all your fics too

I liked it a whole lot it was great

GREAT! The plot thickens... I'm so glad you updated. I can't wait to see what Saraid's role to play is! The transformation of the crystal was REALLY well-written, as was the poem, (song.) -) I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

Oh, this sounds very interesting! Cinderella's always been one of my favourite stories. I really can't wait to see what happens!

You could have done without the ending sentance, you know. It kinda gives away lots, but maybe that was your plan. ?_?

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I dunno. i liked the first chapter better.

interesting...it does have me hooked, I just am not quite sure where your taking it, but the S names are slightly suspicious. ]

Very different from the first chapter, but it still works. You're setting something up...

Oh, this is lovely! I love how you picked this utterly legendary sound to it. I like creationy things. I am most curious. *goes onto next chapter*

Awesome beginning! This has the potential to be a great story. I eagerly await the next chapter.

To quote from one of my favorite songs:

Delicious...

Fulfilling...

Exemplary...

Perfect!

I love it so far, and this is about how far you got in the first draft, right? It's getting great! Sorry, for being a bad reviewer... I'm off to read the two stories I kept on forgetting about!