This is great! Probably one of the best EC fanfics I've read. I was a little disappointed that it was only six chapter. Your writing is superb. You could have wrote about their home, Christine getting pregnant, it could have been a fabulous long story. However, what you did write was astonishing (:

What a sweet story! The part about Christine discovering the book made me laugh.

I loved it. Excellent retelling. Loved the aspects of Christine wishing her angel was a man, Erik's book, the freak out over her period, the love, the bliss, oh!

Very well written, and well paced. Thank you so much for this!

aw!

Erik is so sweet!

An absolutely lovely story. Would love to see an epilogue though.

Loved the story! Really well written and the "dream come true" of all us "happy Erik" lovers. He deserves that!

Thanks for sharing your talent with us!

Anny

I really enjoyed the alternate reality you made for Erik and Christine. You presented a lot of insight into how he thinks.

Well done!

Wonderful story...sweet, erotic, emotional...amazing work. Hope to see more writing from you in the future! :D

Gentle humor, hot sex, and sweetness all wrapped up in one story. Well done. ML

Mme. Giry's caning Erik was a surprise! I like surprises. ML

I like the tenderness and sensitive you're showing in both Christine and Erik. They're being very gentle. ML

Good descriptions of two people learning how to please each other. ML

Sensuous, yet naive. Very well told. ML

Your story was recommended to me, and here I am. The first chapter explains much in a very small amount time. You showed a lot of restraint in stopping where you did. ML

Oh, beautiful. POTO the way every EC fan wishes it would have been. I loved it.