I am enjoying your story so far, having been a big fan of the Highway to Heaven series. I hope that you write some more so we can find out what happens during their "vacation".

I really liked the twist. You seem to have Jonathan down pretty well.

hope you post again soon.

your title aloen made me want to read.

Great story, Kitty! I love Highway to Heaven! I hope you update soon!

Yours Sincerely,

Sherlock's Sparrow

Whoa. Very good, very original, very... Mark. All his comments seemed 'dead'-on, heehee. Pardon the pun, I have a tendency to do that without realizing it. :D

Methinks I'm hooked. Me also thinks you need to update! ;)

I really like this story! When you have time, write more! You've got me hooked! :D

(Hope you don't mind me giving a tip: When you call God things like "he", "him", and "the boss", I think you're sapposed to capitalize the first letters. Like "He", "Him" and "The Boss". *wink*)

Cool! I liked it!