So far, excellent.

I just read all three chapters,but it's not quite working for me. I dunno, maybe I'm just not about the angst this morning. I guess everyone is fairly in character, but I can't quite see where this fic is going, yet. What's the fundamental "neat idea" behind it?

Don't worry I'm reading and it's good. Funeral scene done well. Don't worry about the speed of updates, do then when you can.

Sort of strange, but everyone seems to be kept into character, which is always pleasant.

Update!

Very nice story so far, it's a shame that you aren't getting many reviews. The first chapter was amazing. Between the gory escape of Shego and Drakken to the interesting dreams Kim has been having about Ron, I can tell this story has promise. Keep up the good work and don’t worry about not getting many reviews. If you keep writing they will start coming in.

Until then good writing.

-Forgotten466-

Creepy but I like it.

hey this is great so far, nice to see i'm not the only one thats "too old" to be watching sisney to be doing so, its 3am so if i dont make sense forgive me but i really enjoyed that alot

Please update real soon!

This is really good. I love the way you describe things such as the bullet when it came out of the gun. Beautiful, really, it was quite nice in a morbid kind of way but it still deserves to be appriciated.