Wonderful, I enjoyed it very much. I assume that you meant the story to be a one shot. However I wouldn't mind if you continued, perhaps take the next scene once they get inside the room?

Anyway, I enjoyed the end where Alexander tells Hephaestion home is where he is. Also, vise versa. Made me smile, which was wonderful, because I'm having a bad day! Keep up the good work. Hope to see more work from you soon.

~Baliansword

oh, how heartfelt...I've never seen the movie, but I know a fare bit about the actual historical roles they played... but this was very good, almost as if you'd want it to have happened way back when, because it seems like something they might've done, nicely done

Cuteness! This is a most excellent little ditty.
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I like the idea that their home is wherever the other is.

It´s what I´ve been waiting to happen in the movie

oohh is so cute and sweet, i liked it a lot.

Beautiful! So romantic. Loved it!

Aw, that is so sweet!

oh.. that was so cute..!
You should continue writing it :P
You know.. what happens in the bedroom.. there's so much one could say about it!
But it was a sweet dialogue.. very cute
GaB

Very sweet! I love POV, even if many other's don't.
I loved the: '“Ah, so now you are inviting yourself to stay the night, when on the eve of Gaugamela you declined my invitation to stay,” he jests, amusement setting his eyes alight.' That was a very confusing part of the movie I think, but this actually made me laugh. Good job!

that was beautifully written :) i loved it