I get this. It's so...deep.

liked it.

blank verse is pure freedom, don't you agree? the art of Shakespeare! another revealing moment in the saga of Sirius Black... appropriate word choices, good focus. i love it! if you'll allow me one comment... how is it that you don't like French? it's a wonderful language... and used frequently in HP as well, n'est pas? J.K.R. used to be a French teacher. hmm... what an odd coincidence that the previous reviewer also happens to go by "Argenteus"...

I like. You should do more poetry. You have a real talent for it. Keep writing.

Now I *know* my poetry's not up to snuff. The metaphors were beautifully descriptive of poor dear Sirius and the writing gave me shivers. Brava.

Waw, this is great ! I love the symbolism (the lexical field of the water, the one of darkness, etc) Gah, it's so good, that I've passed in the literature-student-who-analizes-every-good-text-she-comes-across mode, something that barely happens when I'm reading fanfics... You must have spent some time on this poem, and the result is quite great ! Congratulations =)

Omigosh! That was so touching - u describe Sirius in the way I do, which I could never find the words for. JK, you've got some talent!

Siriusly and Most Ridkulusly

Angel

loss of words...

This is excellent! write more poetry, it really gives you a clear picture, and i usually dont like free verse, but that was very good!

This is really good, i like it a lot. You're very talented.

You're a really good poet

*smiles broadly* that's my dad!

That was good... a few of the lines were a bit awkward, for instance, "But he and his friends fight the waves", but on the whole, excellent.

Oh, that gives me chills! Spectacular really. It really painted a picture, you know? Wow, you really have talent, keep up the great poetry!

OOO, I really liked this! ~Daydreamer