OK... I know very little about poetry, so I really don't know what to say. I can write poetry, though, so Im not totally clueless. I think its pretty good. Its almost, like, mysteriously scary, though. Well, the important thing is that I liked it quite a bit, so keep writing!

very very cool

This is a really nice poem. Do Remus next?

Beautifully written. You captured Sirius's character very well-I think I would have recognized him even if you hadn't told me. I had to think about some of it for a while before it made sense, but I like the symbolism. I'm looking forward to reading the rest!

Wow. Sounds like you were born to be a poet! I just can't write poetry and i don't really read it but this is very good!

*applauds* You are a talented writer! Also, Sirius Black has always been one of my favorites. Looking forward to reading more of your Harry Potter poetry )