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L.C.
2006-09-25 . chapter 8
I've been reading your series all afternoon. I like the way you knitted them together. Since this is 9/26/06, you haven't updated since 3/05, it must be done. So I'll go on to Growing up. GSR rox,roc-on
crzygrl
2006-09-19 . chapter 8
hey i liked the story and i also loved it!
just lurking
2006-07-30 . chapter 8
i loved it, loved it, loved it! wow. what a great story!

i think Grissom and Sara would keep it to themselves as well. not just because it's a secret (which it actaully needs to be at work), but because they are private with EVERYTHING in their lives separate and now together.

wow!
just lurking
2006-07-30 . chapter 7
what a wonderfull, thoughtful date!! wow!
just lurking
2006-07-30 . chapter 6
aren't panic attacks inconvenient? they always hit at the worst possible moment...

enjoyed it! loved Sara's openness and Grissom not backing away this time.
just lurking
2006-07-30 . chapter 5
Grissom... i rather like him this way... very well done. enjoyed it!!
just lurking
2006-07-30 . chapter 4
loved the "conversation" on the way to the party.. too funny! Amelia is too cute and seems mighty REAL to me...
just lurking
2006-07-30 . chapter 3
"...books everywhere... older editions that made you want to touch them to feel eras long past." have i mentioned you are an amazing writer? you can write a scene that i can see and feel... in the case of the bookstore... smell... i love the smell of bookstores...

'the book sharing' was a touching part so Grissom, indecisive, yet knowing what he wants at the same time. ::sigh:: loved it!
just lurking
2006-07-30 . chapter 2
"Why would a child need such cheaply produced, timely limited, and uneducational plastic stuff?" you MUST have kids...

"...or did he do that on purpose?" i vote for on purpose...

i enjoyed it! it had a quiet, easy feel to it. that probably sounds crazy, but that me... loved this one...
just lurking
2006-07-30 . chapter 1
you write them so well. i can actually see me sitting there watching this (these) conversation(s) take place!! wow. nicely done..
Rissa545
2006-04-18 . chapter 8
oh, this fic is getting cuter by the min! And that's no critisism! I love it! Going to the sequel right away! Your a great fic author! well done on this one!
DolphinAnimagus
2005-09-05 . chapter 8
This is so sweet--and in-character, too. I loved their dinner date at the botanical garden . . . Do continue :)
Eden Eyes
2005-07-20 . chapter 8
I really enjoyed this story, hell, I enjoyed the whole sereis, it was wonderful! Keep up the great work!
Herky Illiniwek
2005-06-07 . chapter 8
Fantastic! I loved it! You are awesome! -- Erynn :-D
Mandy
2005-04-06 . chapter 8
Oh, how sweet. Do continue.
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