yay i've been looking for this story for a while! love it love it love it! :D mega happy dance now i have to find the other stories i lost during my new computer shuffle...

Funny ending. Your older stories are pretty good.

Oh. I hate her the manipulative b****! Great story so far!

What I really, really love about this story is that you beat the series writers to the best bit of Doppelganger by over two years - the inside of McKay's head! And I liked your vision better, too ;-) Great fic, especially with the whole trust theme running throughout.

Very different from the ep, but I could see how both stories could be described with the same outline. I loved this story, and it was fun to see more ESP, since it's already a canon ability in SGA. I especially liked how you described Sheppard as having the Ancients ability, Ford their heart, and McKay their mind. The M7 cameos were fun too :P

Kavenaugh grimaced, staring around at the people he was with, not understanding the beatific expressions on their faces after meeting Straein.

LOL, McKay and Kavenaugh agreeing on something :P

"No…you just tend to misplace yourself."

Ah It's always so good to read your stories. I hadn't read that one yet. (Got distracted from my reading for a while, but now I'm back on the job! LOL!)

Well done! Keep writing!

Well, I know that it's been a while since you posted this story, but I decided to write a review anyway. :)

I was really into this story, and just *had* to finish it in one go, nevermind the Geometry :P waiting for me. :D

Straein- huh! Personally I'm not shedding any tears over her death, partly because I felt she kinda deserved it. Cold-hearted, I am. ;) That's what you get when you mess with Atlantis's favorite scientist! :) Thanks for this!

An incredible story. I really enjoyed the early chapters where McKay and Sheppard were at odds. Also liked all the scenes about trust. Very nicely done. Oh yes and I always laugh at your running jokes about the dark, unnamed doctor. Especially liked this exchange:

"No, major, I'm not Doctor McKay, I'm Doctor—"

"It's all right lad, he knows who you are," Beckett interrupted.

LOL - you devil you!

Small error: "Fixing the P-90 in place, the major turned to McKay and Sheppard"

Hi. I've read this story already and really enjoyed it. I noticed one error in this chapter that you might want to fix: "Kailin covered her hand with her mouth." Hand and mouth should be switched.

This was an incredible story, and the climax - the chase through the Atlantis of Rodney's mind - was very, very intense. You write very well, with a solid plot and correct grammar and spelling. I suspect you're also a fan of another favorite show of mine -

The Magnificent Seven; I trust you'll know how I know that. Thanks for a great read!

This was so much better than the ep! I loved it, and although Straein was awful for what she did to Rodney, she wasn't a bad girl really, just misinformed. I do quite feel sorry for her. You have a fantastic writing style and I am a big, big fan of everything you post. Being a Mag7 fan too, I love how you keep including characters like Inez. Dare I hope Ezra might one day make an appearance? *cg*

GOOD FIC!

I ABSOLUTELY loved it. :D

loved it

This *quoting from the Incredibles* WAS TOTALLY WICKED! Loved it! Made me cry, made me laugh, made me clap my hands over my mouth! And I'm glad you took Straein out! Horrid wench! Lovely lovely lovely...