Lex is not having a good time at this is she?

"As Sebastian’s head sank down to rest on his chest, as his body relaxed in death, I heard someone crying softly, and realized it was me."

Elephant Shoe!

Really, this is just wonderfully real. I adore it.

Wh00t! I just love her reactions, you've made this so human and believable. It really is wonderful and you should be proud.

"Laughter.

The prick was laughing at me."

I'd think that too I think. Jerk. Name him Niblet or Preston then he'll be sorry. XD

Another great chapter

God, just...

EVERYTHING the discription, the measures, the way this is paced. Perfect. I love the feelings of fear and desperation, I know I wouldn't be very relaxed in her position.

Elephant Shoe!

Keep it coming! I'm anxious to see where you take this!

Very nice! A different twist to the encounter. Will you write more?

Moving along nicely. It seems one little change in the story can cause a whole different set of events to occur. I like!

Another terrific chapter. Excellent!

Great beginning. You've got skills. I'd really love to see how this plays out, I love alternate endings.

Nice beggining far I've only seen two or three other stories with these characters in soon again please and give us an idea of what's going to happen. :)

Terrific, absolutely terrific! Please update

Oh ho ho ho! Pissed, ain't he? At first I thought you were just going to write out the whole movie (I really hate it when people do that) but then- "I grabbed the spear and ran."

Ha ha ha! I would love to see more on this! Please write more!