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Advent Griever
2007-03-30 . chapter 39
After rereading this story, I realized that it is totally awesome, except for 2 things.

You killed Youlan and Waltfield. Wtf dude? Youlan did nothing to deserve that... And Waltfield, well, he didn't deserve to die either.

Your story still is badass though. And you never fixed the whole CIWS thing. You still called it CWIS.
ecnal nogardnap
2007-01-27 . chapter 40
Nice chapter! Very nice at humour, lightheartedness, and all that jazz! Good job!

Hnn...fave scene...Well, I'm guessing one of my faves might have to be Eagle's debut, along with anything involving the SHEZAM!
Advent Griever
2007-01-22 . chapter 40
Interesting chapter, though I think Athrun should have done more.
Kero-chan64
2006-12-30 . chapter 39
WOW! I'm like this: 0.0
I loved the last chapters and the fic is one that I will keep in my heart for a long time! You wrote with a lot of feeling and dedication! I'm very proud to be your friend and wish you the best on your future projects!
*ruffles hair* red red RAWKS!
ecnal nogardnap
2006-12-11 . chapter 39
Wow. That was a very shocking inclusion at the start, but I was so glad that it all turned out well for Adam...A very dark thing to be sure, but the way you had him overcome it is quite good. The little shorts of his experiences with the visitors is a nice touch. I think that you could make a flash animation out of this. XD
I really enjoyed the story, and Adam as well as other original inclusions. Also, it's good that you tied up (at least for Destiny) what happened to the cast. Nice.
And it's good that amidst all this, you could still fit in small bits of humour to defuse the drama. Particularly, plot armour.
Really liked it, even if I'm not hardcore into Gundam! Congrats on completing it! Nothing like a completed story...I completed one large one once, but I deleted it in a fit of anger...XD
The Baka Brigade
2006-11-23 . chapter 39
i hope u plan a sequel to this story when sundam seed eternity is released, . i keep having dreams of eagle destiny and freedom bailing orb out again
Deathzealot
2006-11-21 . chapter 39
Hm... A fitting end to a awesome story. Truthfully only read the first chapter one day and never finished it. However I soon returned and finished reading it. I never laughe so hard in my laugh during the Shinn Drill Sarg segements. I also like that you have stayed true with the Athrun/Cagalli pairing which was in my opinion one of the best pairings ever. Anyways keep it up! I think you should have another story, not about Adam and his friends their story is over. But a new one based during SEED and then can carry over to Destiny. Just a suggestion. So good job!
Rayex
2006-10-21 . chapter 37
I waited a long time for an update since 34, and I sort of gave up on this fic for awhile. But these three latest chapters were worth the wait. Too bad you had to kill the tolerable Fllay. I was looking forward to a reunion scene between her and Kira in the end. To be honest, I also expected a somewhat altered ending to the Messiah battle, as opposed to a parallel of the show's, since you added the Destroy MK II and all. Still, it was good. Hope the final chapter comes soon.
bloodyknight85
2006-10-19 . chapter 37
'And so, that's the end... All's well, end's well... Gilbert and ZAFT have been defeated... The world saved... The war ended... I can only wonder if this is the right path the world should be taking... Who am i to judge that? Adam reunites with old friends... only after he had downed them... He must be feeling rather unhappy as far as i am concerned... The end of a man who dreamed of a world of his choosing... Are Kira and co doing the right thing? We shall see...'

Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
ecnal nogardnap
2006-10-09 . chapter 37
Well, that was pretty sweet, and Luna put up a pretty good fight against Adam considering she was facing a 'near-end-series' tiered mobile suit...XD
I also think you did pretty good with the death scenes. I can imagine that it would be a little sad if Stellar's second death scene was aired as part of the show. Nice.
And so Flay apparently dies, to the cheers of an angry mob sitting in front of their monitors...unless I am very much mistaken, and few stay dead in anime continuities, even (or especially) Gundam...XD
Stupid Kira stealing spotlight in Dullindal confrontation, though that's easily forgiven. =P
Advent Griever
2006-10-09 . chapter 37
You finally update, and you kill a tolerbale Flay. Is it just impossible for a tolerable Flay to exist? WTF did you do that for?
ecnal nogardnap
2006-08-09 . chapter 36
Dammit, I should REALLY add this to my alerts list..which I did...>.>

Man, that was l33t! You got some pretty intense action, both in and out of the mobile suits! The new Destroy, however short lived (at least it seems so), actually proved formidable. White Angel was creepy so thank goodness for killings...XD

When you brought in Rau, I was thinking 'does ANYBODY stay dead anymore?' but it was a pretty nice twist after all the drama put into that scene. I think I should be looking forward to that last fight, though in the event that Dullindal is confronted, I would suggest lettin someone with an actual link to him talk...Stupid Kira stealing spotlight..XD

And on a side note, thanks for the reply! And yeah, you really settled a lot of things I actually feel guilty for bringing up my whinings...XD

Keep it up!
charles ho
2006-08-02 . chapter 36
Its very good fic. Its one of the best gundam SEED fic i ever read.I hope your final chapter is based on Final Plus (Final Plus is the 40 minute uncut of GSD final phase.It also show aftermath of final battlejust in case u didnt know about it) I also hope Adam either convice Shinn not to fight or Adam fight againts Shinn. Keep up good work and update as soon as possible. Good works!
Advent Griever
2006-07-27 . chapter 36
It took me 2 days to read this story from beginning to end. You know what I have to say about it? Freaking Awesome. This story is freaking awesome. Except for Fllay. I hate her. So badly. I'm the most Fllay hating person in the world. I've imagined at least 100 gruesome ways to kill her. Anyways, Alan Sheridan is badass. And did you realize that you named Adam Cancho, ADAM Cancho. And he lived in an underground bunker. Like that movie "Blast From the Past." And it's abbreviated CIWS, not CWIS. Meyrin Hawke and Lacus Clyne are the coolest girls in the Gundam SEED universe, glad you centered in on Meyrin in this. She got really screwed over in the show. This is the best GSD AU story I've ever read. Though none of the other ones are even close to this point in the story. You should have Fllay die. I hate Fllay.
Hajime Morikawa
2006-07-26 . chapter 36
Great chapter!

Just wondering; are you going to use the normal Phase 50 or Final Plus for your next chapter? I hope it's the latter.

Update soon.
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