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Erdbeer-Zwerg
2008-02-14 . chapter 13
wow. you did a very great job!
I love your storys!
pixiepuff101
2006-04-01 . chapter 13
it's really good. i don't like the end. i got confused. but still love it anyway. :D
beefgir
2006-03-11 . chapter 13
my god! this story was good, but mabie it was just my short atention span and the depresion that this story was causing me that made me stop readong for about an hour 1/2 way through.
but then i knew that the depresion wasnt going to end untill i finished the story. this one even though it had sad parts... the whole time that she was in the presant world just hurt to much. i was depresed and upset the whole time. but the whole time i read it i was thinking "i may not be enjoying the way things are going, but damn this story is incredobly creative." so anyway, this one was about 187 pages. thats about 3 times as long as "goodbye to you" but i still think goodbye to u was a much more exciting read, but this one was probably more creative. your writing amases me so much and i pray that u will go to school for writing some day.
SilverAlchemist1
2005-09-12 . chapter 1
wow! i loved this chappie! keep up the good work
Lifestyle
2005-07-07 . chapter 13
How sweet! The perfect ending for the perfect story!
BunnyKat
2005-07-07 . chapter 13
(Bunny)
I laughed *SO* hard through the entire end with the 'being late' thing. And I like Gar's take, 'it's like a promotion'. FUNNY!

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic!
:D
anwen
2005-07-04 . chapter 13
aw reli sweet endin, this story rox, it kicks **, its lyk it shud b made in2 a movie or sumin! u rock, n well done, now excuse me, im off 2 read ur nu story ^^

luvz ya
Anwen
~*~I may not be beautiful, but the name is~*~
Peach Tuesday's
2005-07-01 . chapter 13
aww...the story ended:( I LUVED IT! ur next story sounds great! i hav got a story out too...it is called Sugar Coated Lies...update asap!
StarfireFowl
2005-07-01 . chapter 13
Ah! No! It's over! WOW! Besides the fact that I had like an obsession with the song vindicated last year I loved it. And Star and Robin were really sweet to each other. Wow. Yeah. Can't wait for your new story.
strodgfrgf
2005-07-01 . chapter 13
Wow! this last chapter seems to be based off of the incredibles, Well very good! the whole story is so awsome! and the new story you are starting seems to be very dramatic too! well i can't wait to read it! you are an aweosme writer!
Choice
2005-07-01 . chapter 13
Aww... Cute ending! I had to read one of the parts over to see who was getting married though. xD
BunnyKat
2005-06-25 . chapter 12
(Bunny)
HOLY $H*T! MOTHER F&%#ER! WHERE in the *BEEP* did THAT come from! That was SO unexpected! I have to admit, I cried a little. . . .okay alot, but it was SO AWESOME! I must say, the wait was well worth it. JUST DON"T MAKE US WAIT SO LONG NEXT TIME! *hyperventilating*

Update soon!
:D
misskatey
2005-06-22 . chapter 1
its me amber so yeah... : P
anwen
2005-06-22 . chapter 12
:OAMAZIN CHAPPY! WOW! plzplzplzplz update asap, sori im a mad 1, i jus saw batman begins in the cinema IT WUZ WCKD! buh this wuz like AMAZIN!

luvz ya
Anwen
X
hav a gr8 summer!
^^
Peach Tuesday's
2005-06-22 . chapter 12
great chapter!!:) i luved it! so r they back at the begginging?? UPDATE ASAP!!
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