Please continue with this story. I would love to know when robin screams starfires name at the end of the story and telling her it was all a lie about what her sister blackfire is doing to her. Plus at the end starfire goes back with her friends to live at teen titans tower. I know this because I saw this show on tv one time. Please e-mail me back at sarah.

From,

Sarah Zitter

hm interesting twist to the betrothed episode and the aftershock episode what will terra think of blackfire? and vice versa will they be bitter enemies? or have more in common than they think?

hmm, this story seems familiar - please say your purposley doing this and its not true plagarism (well -no that still is, but please say your adding Terra into SOMEONE ELSE'S story - not your own.

When is the next part?

Hey, this is really good, I´m also a huge Terra fan so I totally love this idea, please, keep it up.
I´m wondering if you´ll write "The Beast within", that would be great

I Liked it but of corse your my favorite athor.

cool story i can't wait to see what happens when you get to 'birthmark'

LOL...

You know the old saying about traveling to forign worlds 'don't drink the water... eat the food... touch the royalty... or do anything else that could kill you or get you crushed by a big man with battle scars...

I'm glad you remembered that Terra was not there during 'Sisters' and likely didn't have any knowledge of Starfire's family...

Keep up the good work...

I like...

It's very similiar to an idea I had (which never got off the ground; the only difference is that mine went from 'Terra' on that she stayed)

I like Terra, I wish they had done more with her in the show... plus they never really got into what she was thinking that resulted in 'aftershocks'

Star/Rob fluff Yay... me want...

this is so cool. YAH TERRA! hee hee. God, the obsession over Terra is getting worse everyday...heh...MORE!

-teentitantruefriend (Terra's freakin #1 fan!)

wow, Betrothed from Terra's point of view ought to be interesting!

Good...Good...I love readin rewrites!

I like the idea of using the same structure as the episodes. That will probably limit you a lot, but on the other hand it does give more of the 'tv' feel :)

Also, wouldn't you have to be a R/S to enjoy the original, unchanged episode? :D

wow tht was really good!! a bit short, but good! is it gonna b like betrothed, but with terra, and more fluff?? well, update soon!

this is like the same as the episode, kinda. *is confuzzled* HO WELL! i like it, update soon!