Because of the first chapter, this should be rated R. Otherwise, it's very, very, good. Good concept. Is the Yeerk getting soft? . Very different idea. Well, when the next chapter comes out, an NC-17 scene couldn't hurt... *grins evilly*

I know, I already reviewed. :) One tiny thing though: in part 1, Cylus was Kevin's Yeerk and in part two, he was Jason's Yeerk. Are they two different Yeerks or was that just a glitch? :D Anyway, AWESOME job! KEEP writing! AND ADD THE NEXT PART SOOOOOON! I can't wait :-D

Oh, man, you really have to keep writing thi s series.

wow! this is really your first story? it is great! please continue it as soon as possible!

I can't tell you how fantastic this story was/is. Please continue it! The characters and writting style stays true to the Animorphs style (at it's peak, no less!). Both of the main characters are very real and likable. Please keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!

the beginning was kind of weird, but it's a good fic. glad you didn't make him too different. you know, he's gay but he's a regular guy.

The Yeerk seems to have two personalities at times...anyway, it's really good! I love it. :) I really hope you add more SOON! :)

please please PLEASE continue this! this is your first story? wow!

from what i understand eric is twelve years old. twelve year olds should not be having sex. shame on him. :) i don't like slash themed stories but i can't deny that you have talent, especially since this is your first story.

Nice job. Pretty strange mix, though. Not used to seeing homosexual themes used for Animorphs, but hey. It was still pretty good. How old are you, anyway? Anywho, pretty good, pretty good. I'm assuming there will be more.

I THINK THAT IT IS DESPICABLE AND WRONG! YOU CAN'T JUST OUT AND POKE FUN AT HOMOSEXUALS. I KNOW YOU DID NOT MEAN TO, BUT YOUR STORY WAS DOWNIGHT WRONG AND UNMOORAL!

Very interesting...weird though. Are you going to add more?