adorable!
Poor Yuki he's smart enough to figure out how "dumb" he is lol

That was absolutely hilarious!! I loved it!!

Yes! Go manipulative Shu! Those watery eyes should do it everytime. Heirachy indeed. Dont worry dear Yuki, you arent dumb, just helpless. ^^;;

OMG THAT WAS FUNNY! how did yuki let shuichi by pink kitten curtains?!?! that's a question many of us may never know! neway, please keep it up!!
Subo-chan

hahaaha... love how it ends. omg, great story, so cute!

*snorts and falls over laughing* That was great! Hierarchies of life get very twisted when it comes to love. Someone should have told Yuki that. Ah well. POor dear.

I never really got to tell you how much I appreciate the evil goodness of this fic. And I don't even read Gravitation, but the dynamic was funny as hell and you certainly pulled something wonderful out of something I wrote, which is even better! Kudos. The last four lines are the type you laugh out loud for.

Awe~ that was unbelievably precious. =D! It's so freaking cyute reading how Yuki corners himself in Shuichi's cyute pouts. Ahahah. Wonderful work. I praise thee absolute. ~Musiq

heh... *claps* good job!

cool. i thought yuki was very slightly out of charater with all the swearing. ist he usually content with just 'damn'?

Ohohohohohoho!
Or Shu is smarter than he seems!
I'm starting to believe that half of those times Shu is faking. Well, maybe not, but it's possible.
I love this one!
It made me smile!
Keep writing!

bravo! that was so witty! loved it!

very cool fic :D added you to my favorites

this is quite interesting and funny! amusing!

Oh gods. Just...oh gods. XD This is hilarious! Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.