Awesome. However you said "failure" when you meant "fracture". Catch ya on the flip side.

Very well written, fantastic little ficlet. I would have however thought it would have been great if perhaps you'd done a different version of 'what remains' rather than what we pretty much saw anyway ie the falling down the shaft and finding the bones... maybe a couple of twists and a different outcome to what happened on-screen? Would have loved it to continue a few more chapters too and also include the other cliffhangers & counsellors thoughts, not so much of a ficlet but more of a fanfic... but then that's me just being greedy. :)