I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!

Hi. Just found this fic. Excellent story with intriguing characters in it for the team to deal with. An interesting situation as well. Liked the character of Devlan especially and how he was used in the story. Plus the Rodney whump and angst from the others of his team was wonderful. I loved the end as well with Elizabeth getting Rodney to spill what he knew. Thanks for sharing your work, look forward to reading your other stories.

Nice story

Oh here's the "He's in defib!" line...LOL

Liked it. A bit hard to follow in some of the chapters (the flashback ones) but over all great! Thanks!

I loved Rodney's flashbacks... I loved how he said the prayer... I loved the end bit... I loved your desrcriptions... your writing style... I loved this entire fanfic. :D

Great story! Just discovered it today. Thanks are inadequate.
I so loved your plot, dialogue and the complexity of the Silians and Hallan--not just one side of anyone. Also, you got the voices of the Team and Weir and Beckett in your dialogue. Your place descriptions made me see the forest, city and topography.

Thanks again--you have a real talent!

Wonderful H/C, MacKay getting whumped to an inch of his life, which I've got to approve of heartily. It was nicely done, with plenty of hurt, and just enough comfort to go round.

I loved your imagery, in particular your paragraph describing the team's first impression of the town. The description was just wonderful and really captured the mood of the place and set up the rebels plight better than pages of exposition. The line about burying their children underneath their homes was so sad.

My other highlights were Sheppard's reason for building a stretcher - because he wasn't putting up with MacKay's whining. I think that captures their relationship perfectly. I also liked the thought of MacKay's secret underground lab, and the fact that Teyla is the one who suspects its existence.

Thanks

*standing ovation and wild cheering* Woo-hoo! what a ride! :D Awesmome, amazing, fantastic and excellent *grin* ya done good :D

Great ending to a great story. (:
-Working on another one, I hope I hope?

LOL!

great chapter! great ending!

i totally loved this fic, it's sad that it's over. :(

i hope you're working on more fics or a sequel!

*cough* SEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUEL! *cough*

excellent fic!

Excellent ending. I loved this story! Great job!

Aw! Fantastic chapter! I love the character interaction *blissful sigh* One more to go, huh? Can't wait!

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful story! I loved the final chapter! You did a fantastic job and this is definitely one to keep. Rest up... cause you know we will be waiting for the next one! J

Aw, this was such a wonderfully written story! :) Keep up the great work!