Finally a no yaoi fanfic *hallelujah song* eh...what?*Look around to find the song*anyway finally yee-haw!
Terry:Someone call me?
Me:...ehm...no?
Terry:Oh...hey,what's that?
Me:*hug Terry*It's a no yaoi Kevin fanfic!
Terry:Bruna...I...can't...breath...let...me...go...
Me:Sumimasen Terry!!^ ^
Terry:No prob...i think...Kevin will be happy with that.
Me:Yep!!Yep!!
Terry:Hey,Kevin!
Kevin:What?
Terry:Bruna found a no yaoi fanfic!
Kevin:Really?About who?
Terry&Me:*points to Kevin*You
Kevin:You-ARE-KIDDING!!REALLY??!!
Terry&Me:*nods*
Kevin:Finally!*hallelujah song* Huh?What the?
Me:Yeah i know...anyway good job girl!
Kevin&Terry:Yep!!

This is possibly...THE BEST FAN FICTION STORIE THAT I HAVE READ!
I LOVE YOUR WORK! Keep doing the good work!

It was Amy! She was the one telling Jackie all Kevin and Mars's secrets! And Kevin loses to Mars in the Chojin Crown! I shouldn't have read this before reading your other fic, but I'll still enjoy reading about the fight.

I'm looking forward to the sequel, which must be about Edward and/or Amy, right?

Mars didn't graduate again! And now I really hate Doomsmane! The arguments with Kevin and Amy were good again, I hope she comes into your other stories more, she makes me laugh.

Wow, that was a long chapter, and the story really took a turn. Edward has really caused problems between Kevin and Mars, and Doomsmane is just evil! I loved the way the spiked log scene played out, it was especially good because we already knew about Kevin's fears and the tensions between Kevin and Mars.

Poor Kevin he's alone and abodoned! I hope you're next fic is one with Kevin and Amy in it as they play off each other so well.

I really consider myself a fool for not reviewing this amazing fic of yours. This fic is something this section needed, a fic where Kevin isn't gay and Mars isn't either. I also read the last chapter, and I spoiled the ending for me. I'm such an asswipe. :3

All right Amy is back in the story.

OH, I am such a bad girl!

I read this one before the next chapter of The Reason, and spoiled some of the good bits for myself. Why?

I COULDN'T HELP MYSELF!

Gosh, you just had to put this one up first, huh...

To my credit, though, I did wrestle with my conscience for about two seconds before my Lucretiaholic tendencies kicked in.

And I KNEW that it was Amy! Knew it!

And--

A SEQUEL??

YES! Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes! YES! WOOT WOOT!

:) Lemme guess what it's going to be about.

I really want to see the next chapter please.

Woo-woo! Kevin got a little action there!

...And now I also know why Mars was laughing so hard in the gym. God, I just love the stuff you put poor Kevin through.

I wonder, though... What do you have planned for the next chapter that will make me want to hit you with a large stick, eh?

This chapter's probably one of my favorites for this story so far.

I have no idea how you manage to write two stories side-by-side, especially when one is sort of a backstory/informative for the other; we're all very lucky to bear witness to your talent.

Hm, Edward is either very troubled, is causing a lot of trouble. I don't think Mars really did anything to him, but why is he lying like that? This fic certainly is different from your other pieces of work, it is darker, but I'm still enjoying it.

I liked that little glimpse into Mars's past. Now I have to know where he came from. There's more, I just know there is! My favourite thing about this story is the little insights we get into both Kevin Mask and Mars's pasts. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Bad mars bad. I think Edward might be cute.