hiyah,

i love this story you should do more please :). if its not to late tht it.

The Assassin

iona

this is cool story, but it's been almost 3 months since you're last update, you have to continue this story

hey u didnt finish this one either...

im very disapointed in u but im just a reader a disapointed reader but a reader and as your reader i say that i liked this story and aprove of u and all ur writing but am sad you dont finish your stories

your very sad reader,

Halet

does henry know Liam? Ne ways it is really good!

yay good story good story keep writing i'm reading!

good story so far :) but really really really short chapters... so... i dunno. ;) its like your taunting the readers.. "here look a new chapter! .. muahahahahaha..." its like as soon as i get into it it stops. but i love the story

Hey this is a really good story. I would want to read more if there is more...One thing that kinda through me off was the exclamation points. They make it seem like the person is thinking something suprizing...Anyway I really like the first chapter. How you used description to flesh out the characters before they even said anything.

hey i like this story. Don't stop writing.