nice

I gotta admit, this story is what got me into Fanfiction writing. Thank you, Tomy.

This was...SO GOOD! I can't believe this! This is excellent! Thank you so much for writing this and sahring it over the internet. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Great story! About the only suggestion I can make is double-spacing your paragraphs, that'll make it easier to read on a computer screen. Otherwise, this was a good read.

I liked this story.It was really good.

Fantastic! I absolutely loved this story. I'm adding it and you to my favorites. Keep writing.

An amazing debut from a stunning writer