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Blissfully Disturbed
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
“Thank you for staying with me while I puked my guts out,” he would have said.

Misao groaned and banged her head on the table. The scenario was about as romantic as giving someone a rotten melon and saying “Darling, you’re like an old shoe.”

HAHAHA! Nice one. I like this fic. It's so... unusual,unique and funny
RachelAshley
2007-08-17 . chapter 1
Yay! I just wanna let you know that you're a really good writer, and I enjoy reading your fics very very much :)
Pendari
2006-08-10 . chapter 1
A whopping good read.
That was wonderful.
You portrayed them perfectly, which is more than I can say for myself.
Heh, that was just... perfect.
I'm repeating myself, aren't I.
Still. A bloody fantastic job. [=
Keitaku
2006-04-11 . chapter 1
:)Wow.
That was amazing.
Funny in all the right parts, too.

" 'Happy BIRTHDAY, Aoshi-sama!” Misao practiced as the minutes ticked down. “HAPPY birthday, AOSHI-sama. Happy birthDAY, Aoshi-saMA.' "

Hehe, I was cracking up like heck. ^_^ Brilliant story, brilliant plot, and NO ERRORS TO BE FOUND. Wow.

Awesome story. Arigatou for the read!

-Keitaku(:
Miztical-Dragon
2005-08-02 . chapter 1
lol that was cute too! I love your writting style! ^_^ I'm off to read more! lol -Krystal-
Kindled Chime
2005-06-25 . chapter 1
This is the second time I've read this fic and it's just as funny as the first time.
"Or he could still jump out the-no."
I love the fact Aoshi keeps considering jumping out the window. Perfect.
Ms Western Ink
2005-02-17 . chapter 1
"I want to be alone."

One of the single most depressing story openers ever and almost guaranteed to hook me and drag me right in. It's also something that usually ends badly and leaves me displeased, but not this one.

It's weird, writing a review for a story more than once because I don't want to say what I said the first time, and usually I don't remember, but in this case I do and... I'm rambling, ignore me.

*laughs* “That my best kimono isn’t even worthy of whores?”
CatH
2005-02-03 . chapter 1
Wonderful. Loved the humor, believable characterization in keeping with the humor, meaning it was not overly done. Its been a long while since I have read a good Aoshi/Misao humor-romance. A bit yukky if I imagine it when they kissed but all in all, a fun read.
Rabid Lola
2005-02-01 . chapter 1
XD So cute. Yet not fluffy because of all the funny-ness. Admire your talent in putting all the stuff that makes you snicker just when it gets waffy. :D Very original, too.

Also liked the way you made us all think it was food poisoning, and when we came to the drinking part we're like...OH! That's why. ^_^

Two thumbs up! keep writing!
CrypticMaidenRK
2005-01-31 . chapter 1
Hehe, the ending made me laugh! This was really cute and awsome. I hope your write more one shots like this becasue u really have a knack for them! U also are a really good writer, keep up the good work. Also, I liked a lot of what Misao had to say, lol, it was funny! I hope you write many many many many more stories. I wish you luck! Bye
Mimi-san
2005-01-31 . chapter 1
WONDERFUL! What a masterpiece... just the right namount of angst and drama! I love it! Wee~*
Lunar Ember
2005-01-31 . chapter 1
Oh! that was just the right amount of waff! :D great fic! :D
Shin Sankai
2005-01-30 . chapter 1
Hehehehe, thias was great, I enjoyed muchly and am glad you decided to contribute to the SLML January Challenge. Hope to see more works in the making soon, ^__^.
gabyhyatt
2005-01-30 . chapter 1
great fic
The last samurai
2005-01-30 . chapter 1
whee! me likey
me really really like!
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